Essay topics: TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the down of humanity, sociaties acount to variety of difficulties and problems and each person based on its acuqueres demands to be informed about surrendings. Some people are of the opinion that just one side that is actually relay on their thoughs and they would be accept it as a fact; while others of the opinion that it might not be correct, payying attention to one side. I personally sunscribe to the view that there are enormous factors that may affect to phenomena and we should see broud picture, resulting in demand to different resources. I feel this for two main reason; in the following paraghragraphs my reasons will be elaborated on in more detail.
To begin with, it is undeniable that there are several angels for a event, hence differend perspective and ideas. generally speaking, the more people care, the more apealing for information. Heeding to different news resources is one of the characters of developed societies, in which is freedom and democracy. To delve more into it, take US as an example. policies of this modern society make based on the freedom and feasible news for different opinion would be find by people who wants to know variety of aspects of a happen.
Secondly, well-formed people tend to be educated and more being carfull about their life. For instance, a farmer who lived during the past time, actually their life was confined to their basic needs, howeve, nowadays thatnks to the thechnological breakthroughs and accessibility to several information, the farmers would care more about the policies and what happening on the society. it means that just as people have fostered with literacy, So do they demand to access information have hightened on the societies. although we can easily distingush residents who want to be awar by their acquracy of many resources, government avertise their ponts of view on local news, which is obstacle for people who really want to know and well-formed about different aspects. As a case in pont, youngers who actually have bether education rather that old generation, seek for new data more in different news; nevetheless, olders belive and trust more to government and less search for differend resorces.
Drawing upon the reasnons that I mentoned above, although there are several ecxeptions excluded from general rule, I beilive that for being wellformed, we have to get information from defferent news resources. Not only is it one of the characters of modern societies, but also the more educated people a society would nurtured, the more increasing for informaton and paying attention to the surronding we can observe in the societies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relaid', 'relayed'.
Suggestion: relaid; relayed
...ion that just one side that is actually relay on their thoughs and they would be acce...
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Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...rrect, payying attention to one side. I personally sunscribe to the view that there are enormous fac...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...iable that there are several angels for a event, hence differend perspective and ...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Generally
... hence differend perspective and ideas. generally speaking, the more people care, the mor...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Policies
...ve more into it, take US as an example. policies of this modern society make based on th...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...who wants to know variety of aspects of a happen. Secondly, well-formed people tend to...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...instance, a farmer who lived during the past time, actually their life was confined to th...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some information'.
Suggestion: some information
...ical breakthroughs and accessibility to several information, the farmers would care more about the ...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...cies and what happening on the society. it means that just as people have fostered...
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Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...ation have hightened on the societies. although we can easily distingush residents who ...
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Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'nurture'
Suggestion: nurture
...he more educated people a society would nurtured, the more increasing for informaton and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07356321839 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80192071223 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526436781609 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3961005919 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.9375 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1875 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13713239809 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512893808405 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372711275313 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091755879795 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178082285829 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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