TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the down of humanity, sociaties acount to variety of difficulties and problems and each person based on its acuqueres demands to be informed about surrendings. Some people are of the opinion that just one side that is actually relay on their thoughs and they would be accept it as a fact; while others of the opinion that it might not be correct, payying attention to one side. I personally sunscribe to the view that there are enormous factors that may affect to phenomena and we should see broud picture, resulting in demand to different resources. I feel this for two main reason; in the following paraghragraphs my reasons will be elaborated on in more detail.
To begin with, it is undeniable that there are several angels for a event, hence differend perspective and ideas. Generally speaking, the more people care, the more apealing for information. Heeding to different news resources is one of the characters of developed societies, in which is freedom and democracy. To delve more into it, take US as an example. policies of this modern society make based on the freedom and feasible news for different opinion would be find by people who wants to know variety of aspects of a happen.
Secondly, well-formed people tend to be educated and more being carfull about their life. For instance, a farmer who lived during the past time, actually their life was confined to their basic needs, howeve, nowadays thatnks to the thechnological breakthroughs and accessibility to several information, the farmers would care more about the policies and what happening on the society
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relaid', 'relayed'.
Suggestion: relaid; relayed
...ion that just one side that is actually relay on their thoughs and they would be acce...
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Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...rrect, payying attention to one side. I personally sunscribe to the view that there are enormous fac...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...iable that there are several angels for a event, hence differend perspective and ...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Policies
...ve more into it, take US as an example. policies of this modern society make based on th...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...who wants to know variety of aspects of a happen. Secondly, well-formed people tend to...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...instance, a farmer who lived during the past time, actually their life was confined to th...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some information'.
Suggestion: some information
...ical breakthroughs and accessibility to several information, the farmers would care more about the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01132075472 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79208054632 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0617083534 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112331740211 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446054571319 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328548285711 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074037225098 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036625601815 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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