Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resourses.
Nowdays people must be informed from different areas. If a person is well-informed he or she can make a good impression on the other persons. People can get information from many resourses such as TV, radio, or the Internet, which is the most actual today in my opinion. While some people think that they can be informed without many resources, I think that people must get information from many diverse news sources. I have some reasons to support my choice.
The first reason which comes to explain my choice is that one information resourse can not make you aware of the various things happaning in the world. Today people must access many different sites in oder to get as much news as possible. In one site there can be reported only about politics, in the other about culture. Via entering many sites you can hear news and at the same time get deep knowledge about everything. For example, two years ago I was getting information from the Internet, but I was folloing only one page. But now I am following many pages on the Internet and now I am aware at events that are taking part in our world. I can say now I am more informed than before. I think this is an important issue to be taken into account.
The second reason which is equally important to my mind is that in some sourses there can be much wrong news. In many sourses people can tell about something not the truth. If you do not use many sources you may not know the truth. Reporters can write scandalous news, for example, about actors in order to gather as much views as they want. For example, my sister told me yesterday the news that she had written on the Internet about one of the singers of our country. I could not believe that it was true. But then I find that news from the other more reliable page and read that it was not true information. That proves that some sources can be trustful and some can not.
Thus, to sum it all up, it can be concluded that taking into account the reasons mentioned above getting information from different resourses is much better than being informed from several sources. In order to be well-informed people must follow variuos reliable sourses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57908163265 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38083196367 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466836734694 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1418823835 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0434782609 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0434782609 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314925116149 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100124592783 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809370246035 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227300582116 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655985571546 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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