Truth is worth to preserve. Telling the truth is one of the targets we use to choose a friend, a partner or a person to do things with us. It is very simple, but sometimes, finding a person who is telling the truth to you is very difficult. To me, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship if you want to get closer to that relationship.
First of all, the truth builds a bond between people. If you like somebody and you want to make friends with them, you have to tell the truth because that person will think that you are honest and truly want to be friends with them. They will want to be friends with you too. Otherwise, if you always tell lies to your friends, will they want to be friends with you? Of course, never. Who wants to make a friend with a liar?
Besides, telling the truth helps you and your friends to find mutual respect and trust. If your best friend lied to you once, you will forgive them because you are best friends and you think that was just a joke, but if your friend says that a few more times, you will gradually lose faith in this friend and you will think that it was deliberately teasing and not thinking about your feelings. You will stop playing with that friend immediately. Another example is that your friend borrow you some money to do something and they don't say the reason why they borrow you. The reason might be for something good but they don't say it to you for some reasons. But you don't think so. You might think that "after this friend borrowed my money, he will not repay me" and of course, you will not lend that money to him. If the situation get worse like if you two are best friend, you will think that this friend doesn't trust you, doesn't consider yourself a good friend. Between you and that friend will create a misunderstanding that separates your friendship. Only when the other friend tells the truth do both of you get rid of that misunderstanding.
Through the two examples above, you have certainly seen the importance of telling the truth and hope that you will tell the truth in every situation so that everyone can understand and trust each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, of course, first of all, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44221105528 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3411261596 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424623115578 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4623603799 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1904761905 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143918470327 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748827976079 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123082045697 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170147239137 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143085515036 0.0645574589148 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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