Truly I have to say, I love technology. It's an amazing invention that has brought many benefits as well as creations to life. But, is technology is always good? Especially for traditional skills and ways of life. Could any of those things might be changed? If yes, is it pointless to try and keep them alive? Well, I think no.
Let's consider some things that we might not have if technology doesn't exist. The most important thing for our generation, also the explanation for the reason why technology is very essential to life is education. You can easily find a computer or a projector in your class. Your teachers use them everyday to teach you and they might not use old books full of boring things. They use PowerPoint, a software used for teaching methods to teach and to do presentations in a more interesting and amazing way. That's an ideal thing that technology has brought us. Another way this awesome invention has helped us with learning is it helps us to do assignments as well as exercises easier. There are more and more websites being created to help us with learning various types of subjects. You can quickly type the key words and the computer will appear the right websites where other guys will help you solve your assignments.
The next reason is nothing less important: Working & Finding Jobs. It's easier to sit and type on the computer rather than sitting and writing a long page of paper. Working with computer saves time to think and also to do your work. If you can't think of any ideas, just search on the Internet and maybe you can find inspirations from the things you have found out. Finding job also needs technology. Websites will help you gain experience to find jobs faster and with the best efficiency through the experiences of previous job seekers. They also offer advice to find a good company that suits your qualifications and specialty. That's very useful.
After considering 3 reasons, I think technology is worth to be "lived". It can bring a huge benefit if you use it moderately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7323943662 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68288280003 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560563380282 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3774130447 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6153846154 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6538461538 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88461538462 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171684527876 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456688047109 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555145180139 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103651836164 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629399520242 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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