Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
It is critically important that we should always act with integrity in life so that there is a strong, consistent relationship with our close people. Personally, I believe telling the truth is a key component to feel a real kinship with others. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, honesty always plays a crucial role when choosing real friends. Actually, you can tell your important secrets with confidence only to those who can keep them forever without telling them to other people, so only honest friends are able to keep your secrets hidden from others. Moreover, it is also totally safe to share your inner feeling with them. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I went to school to study for the first time in my childhood, I didn't own many friends. I was a lonely and afraid child who don't interact with a society that much at all. However, I really wanted to make friends so that I could spend most of my time playing video games in the computer club, or playing football on the pitch. One day, I accidentally smashed our classroom's window while I was playing football. Fortunately, there was only one guy who saw that, but he promised not to inform teachers about that event. As a result, we became best friends so far, and nothing could separate our relationship since then.
Furthermore, I think friends can be benefitted from a golden chance of trust because most of the time they deal with problems together and understand each other well than others. Therefore, they can put their friendship into use by working together with such as starting their own company or doing business. There are probably not going to face many troubles in their careers due to their firm relationship with each other. For instance, my cousin has had a friend of his since his childhood, and they grew up together, helping each other in tough moments of life. After graduating the university, they just decided to be colleagues and start their own company with which they became so successful in life. Based on this experience, I strongly feel that a strong bond made by trusting each other can lead you to success in your life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that telling the truth or being honest is the most important feature of a true relationship. This is because it helps you to find a real friend for you and can also benefit you financially.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71596244131 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59339106664 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544600938967 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2816089694 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90476190476 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119928243647 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387379322626 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687306749062 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100927638876 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570333813056 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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