Although scientists have been putting a lot of efforts into understanding the formation of human relationships, there are still debates brewing on whether parents are our best teachers. It is undeniable that parents play a role in cultivating the development of children. In my point of view, parents are indeed the best teachers in many aspects of life.
It is no doubt that parents are a child’s first teacher, and usually children are more affected by what their parents do. Born without knowledge and social skill, children are eagerly looking for someone to imitate. By observing parents behaviors, children gradually build up emotional well-beings such as: empathy, forgiveness and humility, which can hardly be learned without parents support. For example, parents assist their children with love and giving, which help them acquire empathy and respond to people’s need and suffering. Since the world is becoming more and more competitive, the value of empathy is sometimes eliminated through the competition between peers. As a result, parents do play an important role in being our best teacher in cultivating emotional core values.
In addition to the process of emotional development and growth, parents are role models for children as well. Recent surveys suggest that one of the most effective role models lie in overcoming difficulties in life, which can be introduced by parents. There are challenging obstacles for people to face in their daily lives such as: getting to and from school or work, having enough money for bills, and health related issues. However, the actions of parents, which demonstrate perseverance and can help young individuals overcome these difficulties. For instance, when children are struggling to learn math, the role of the parents may reminds them of the vale of not giving up, which will lead to success in academic performance.
Young individuals learn strong communication skills from their parents, which aid them in all aspects of life. People improve communication skills by interacting with their parents to gain effective social skills. In fact, communication is one of the most difficult areas in a relationship to navigate, and parents can help us enhance such abilities. Communication skills learned from parents are generally can’t be acquired from outside world, because there is no such detail training programs that cover all aspects such as: respecting other viewpoints, trust, confidence, and clarity of the message. This interesting fact again illustrates the role of parents as best teachers.
Due to the fact that some of the skills and abilities we learned from our parent can’t be easily gained at schools or at work, parents are proven to be the best teacher. They assist us not only in having personal achievements but also psychological success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2406.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37053571429 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89462027399 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533482142857 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7289113411 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.571428571 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218143727842 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780730365097 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724040920831 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143841532817 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065042046629 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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