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I am Marziyeh Khavari from Afghanistan. I graduated master of Horticulture from Tehran University, Iran, in 2019. Now, standing where I should choose what to do next, I plan to continue my Ph.D. in the TKI project ’Branching in tomato’ position. I believe that a Ph.D. in plant breeding from Wageningen University would set me miles ahead to reaching my goal.
For my master thesis under the advising of Dr. Reza Fatahi, I worked on six commercial hazelnuts to detection tolerant and productive hazelnut with some supportive material such as Salicylic acid, Kaolin, Nitric oxide. Recently I submitted part of the result of my research on the Scientific Reports Journal. Moreover, one of my desire is to draw the relationship between annual productivity and climate parameters. Beyond my proposal thesis, the stability of six cultivars during 2011-2018 through combined linear regression and neural fuzzy network analysis were performed for modeling hazelnut production considering Karaj climate change parameters. I am going to submit the results of this research in the article until next month.
As time goes, I become interested in the Linux operating system. people have often said that I am intelligent in computer statistics and related software. I have been fortunate to have the opportunity to work and learn with the research team of Dr. Mohamad Reza Naghavi in computational biology and bioinformatics. That developed my knowledge regarding genomics and discovery or prediction of the regulatory sequence of transcription factor (TF) genes, marker (SSR and SNP ) from, RNA-seq sep data. I extended my research by prediction and identification of some transcription factors, genes, microRNA and other non-coding RNA (ceRNA, circRNA, lncRNA) in the pathway that regulator abiotic stress (heat stress) and secondary metabolic (Taxol) using Genome-wide statistical analysis I will complete our draft and write an article as soon as possible.
While I was studying for master I took the additional course with Dr. Houshang Alizadeh who is one of the best scientists in the field of genetic engineering in Iran. I believe that this course gives me more insight into how this knowledge helps my research. I have done my final assignment at this course entitled ‘application of CRISPR cas 9 to increase of secondary metabolite) Taxol in hazelnut cell culture’ and obtained the best grade compared to my peers. I want to perform this technique in my thesis because of simple, cost-effective and efficient for targeted genome editing but I could not due to lack of equipment and grant since the economical sanction of Iran.
Recently I am working for CellKGP company (Implement the Laboratory Services) as data and computational biology analyzer. This job provided an environment that’s very important to intellectual development and coincides perfectly with my interests.
Ultimately I want this Ph.D. position because I believe this will allow me to focus on different accept of crop science such as plant breeding, bioinformatics, genetic engineering. In addition, I strongly believe that the framework of this position helps me to pursue and satisfy my goal in master thesis. A future career goal of mine is to work in partnership with developing countries especially in the Afghanistan economy in the marketing of horticulture products which is achievable by enhancement of knowledge in plant breeding in the scientific field. In conclusion, I am confident that the initiative, problem-solving skills, and energy I have shown in the past have prepared me intellectually and emotionally for graduate school at Wageningen University. I am eager to begin the process by my commitment to research. It is my goal to become highly skilled and to contribute real value to the projects.
Thank you for considering my application
Sincerely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 52.1666666667 182% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3259.0 1977.66487455 165% => OK
No of words: 606.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37788778878 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96155895361 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19902311182 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 342.0 212.727598566 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 1033.2 618.680645161 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7253755128 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.703703704 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 204.0 86.8835125448 235% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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