To be a successful person, one must be open to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind
At 20th and 21st centuries with the galloping rate of science, there is no doubt that world is changing dramatically. Actually, no one can turn a blind eye to the direct and indirect effects of world in people’s daily lives. A simple recognition of this argument lends our discussion to the questions of how people can have promising future and keep up with the world. Although some people adhere to this belief that opening mind to new ideas cannot be useful, in my vantage point, being motivated to change mind can be highly beneficial due to the development of technology and finding a decent job.
A first aspect to point out is that what provokes people to open their minds is development of technology. As a matter of fact, people need to enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizon in order to make progress. Also they should get familiar with the latest technologies which are introduced by the advent of Internet. To illustrate more, take a case of a student who does not have enough knowledge about how he can work by computer and hunt valuable information available on Net. it is axiomatic, neither can he compete with his skillful classmates, nor can he acquire best grades in class; however if he had kept abreast of world's changes and opened his minds, he might have an extraordinary future.
The second subtle point is that finding a decent occupation can be considered another advantage of accepting new ideas. It is absolutely undeniable, in the competitive world of today, jobs are being specialized and sophisticated so much so that everyone in charge of a particular job should enjoy strong analytical thinking skill. Without a shadow of doubt, people can fortify their analytical thinking by being exposed to different opinions. That is why they can make rational and immediate decisions when they face challenging situations, so they can seize valuable opportunities which are provided in their life. Not only can they run their own business, but also companies try to hire these ingenious persons.
On the whole according to the above-mentioned points and details, it is crystal-clear that willing to change minds lead to person's success because he will not lag behind modern life and he can find proper occupation. It is high time we stopped overlooking the fact that a person can have a promising future without taking risks or changing his opinions. Have you ever seen a successful person without enough information about technology? Can you consider a person prosperous without having a decent job? I absolutely believe no!
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'no doubt', 'as a matter of fact', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217948717949 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.168803418803 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104700854701 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405982905983 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0662393162393 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108974358974 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0512820512821 0.0351676179071 146% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84808771521 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034188034188 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0042735042735 0.00188951952338 226% => OK
Determiners: 0.0790598290598 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0405982905983 0.0209618222197 194% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.017094017094 0.0139019557991 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2562.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 428.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98598130841 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380841121495 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257009345794 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189252336449 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142523364486 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84808771521 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584112149533 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 71.2692311221 59.2087087015 120% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5263157895 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1079253902 48.84282405 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.842105263 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.2272503689 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.37209302326 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279523130378 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119151548941 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717709008213 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.459326201848 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129939374483 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936144602719 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946741034602 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307536147048 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0611554895166 0.067059652881 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187892676005 0.210909579961 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661429984965 0.0618886996521 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.