In recent a few years, life has changed a lot due to the advanced technology and the internet. People are looking to be successful, so a person does not know how to deal with the new ideas whether he or she changes his or her mind to the new development or not. Personally, I believe that people must change their mind. I feel this way because of three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Close minded people will change their mind soon or later. People tend to do not accept the new ideas at first and then eventually will accept it and get accustomed to it. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I graduated from high school, I bought a smartphone. In my town, buying a smartphone at that time is forbidden. I remember that my father did not talk to me for 3 months because of that phone. After a while, my neighbors started to open their mind and accept the idea and buy smartphones. As you can see, by time close minded people will change.
In addition, people who do not open their mind will cause destruction. A company that wants to be up to date and trying to modernize its tools but the employers do not accept it, this company will lose a lot of money. For instance, I worked in a pharmacy which most of the worker were seniors. The CEO bought a computer system trying to make it easy for us. There were only few junior pharmacists use the system. After a while, no one used the system because it was distracted for the customers as well as for the employers. As a result, the CEO wasted the money for buying that system.
Frankly speaking, it is difficult to change your life if you like routine, but it will take a few days and it will be routine. Accepting new ideas could be your way for success. For example, when I bought an iPhone for my mother, it was difficult for her. After a few months, she started a business by selling homemade food on social media.
All in all, I strongly believe that people must open their minds for a change. This is because they will open it in the future, and if not they will cause burden.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34271099744 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40075951204 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506393861893 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7733840871 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.92 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.64 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.32 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342352676601 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826535020364 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919240583237 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192894269041 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832801227107 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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