The best way to achieve happiness is to make other people happy.
Every person wants happiness in their life. Some people help or do something for someone's for happiness. However, other people find other ways to get happiness. From my vantage point, I am jubilant when I do something good for my close ones and helpless people. I get happiness from this way because in my life happiness come from my family, friends and blessing of who I helped them.
First of all, every person love their family and pals because of the person share not only emotion and feeling but also sharing life event. Parents, friend and siblings who people stand with the person in better and worse situation, therefore happiness of person life connected with close ones. My own experience compelling example of this, I love, care, and concern to my best friend. Most time I spend with him and enjoying every moment of life. One year ago, his father passed away, he was sorrow about his father. One month after his birthday came, he not happy because he missed his father. Since his not happy, I also feel bad. I made cake for him as like his father was every birthday makes cake. I not prevent his whole sadness but somewhat he feel good and celebrated his birthday. He was happy, and then I was also happy for him. Accordingly, my happiness accompanied with my close ones.
Secondly, I feel good when I help to helpless people. For example, every New Year, I give blankets, cloths, and foods in orphan age and needy people. They give me huge blessing which is fill my life full of satisfaction, love, and happiness. If, they eat food and wear cloths each time they gives blessing and miss me.
However, some people claims that happiness not connected with other life because in modern life nobody thinks to other people. Still, I firm with my idea, since person cannot enjoy his life without other happiness because he needs other person to sharing emotion and feeling.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, people gladness connected with their family and friends felicity. Blessing helps to people feel good and his life fill with joy. These are reasons why I believe that other people happiness more prominent role in our happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 752, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...event his whole sadness but somewhat he feel good and celebrated his birthday. He wa...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...eat food and wear cloths each time they gives blessing and miss me. However, some p...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80266666667 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37721629923 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498666666667 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1238645088 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.04 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216672139403 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660528724019 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732266391104 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12998753995 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716098673657 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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