It is better to are your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice.
Live a life is not easy task especially for human. Every stage of life, humans face huge problems and struggling to overcome. It is essential to make certain decision in life, it’s not easy but still some people make their own decision by own self without guidance of any people. While other people prefer to make decision by ask to other people. From my perspective, I made my all decision based on my intelligence and common senses rather than follow others opinion. I feel this way because this habit built my confidence and make me independent, and result of my decision I appreciate and blame to myself rather than other people.
First of all, a person has confident on his skill and observation from his life. Each step our life teach us many of things which helps acquiescent of chapters of life. If, a person make own decision, then he trust own self and gradually build confidence which is help to fight every obstacle without getting other advices. My own experience compelling this idea, five years ago, I had to select my graduation program and I was very bemused for choosing field. One day I sit alone and cogitate about education, I have good percentage on high school and I knew that I got admission easily. From my knowledge, I m master in biology subject and more interest to learning different medicine work various organ, so I choose pharmacy field. One year ago, I completed my graduation in pharmacy with A grade. That decision really help to my whole academic years, it make me independence because I decide my education from my experience and knowledge. Many other friends finished graduation in dentist field according to their parents and friends interest but I choose my own decision which make me self reliant because I not need any other suggestion in my life.
Secondly, get the suggestion to rid the problems is good notion but sometimes suggestions destroy the relationship with close ones or other people. For instance, a person takes advices of her friend and follows it. If the problem solve then he appreciate to her friend but if problem not solve even become complex then, the person blame to her friend for suggestion. That decision cause detrimental effect on several relationship, therefore, it is better solve the problem by own abilities. If person fail to solve the problem then, blame own abilities or if he success to rid the problem then, he gratitude to own self. Accordingly, these decisions not harm any relationship to other people.
However, many people penchant that asking other people advices is help to avoid serious consequences and less risk. Whatever, I firm my opinion because all people have not same problem and other people advise not fully assure that solve the problem. Many occurrences this advises bringing other problems rather than solve.
In conclusion, although many people believe that solve problem buy getting other people advises, I believe that fight to obstacles from my abilities and experience of my life because its build my confidence and make me self reliant, and maintain my relationship with other people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...wn self without guidance of any people. While other people prefer to make decision by...
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Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'trusts'.
Suggestion: trusts
...If, a person make own decision, then he trust own self and gradually build confidence...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...ram and I was very bemused for choosing field. One day I sit alone and cogitate about...
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Line 2, column 858, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...lly help to my whole academic years, it make me independence because I decide my edu...
^^^^
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'appreciates'.
Suggestion: appreciates
...ollows it. If the problem solve then he appreciate to her friend but if problem not solve ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'causes'.
Suggestion: causes
...er friend for suggestion. That decision cause detrimental effect on several relations...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun relationship seems to be countable; consider using: 'several relationships'.
Suggestion: several relationships
...at decision cause detrimental effect on several relationship, therefore, it is better solve the prob...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to bring'.
Suggestion: to bring
... problem. Many occurrences this advises bringing other problems rather than solve. In ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
... many people believe that solve problem buy getting other people advises, I believe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2579.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94061302682 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66083402846 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475095785441 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 827.1 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.933588132 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.16 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.88 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280355717646 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884290053077 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06924533973 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187564379012 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702417451295 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.