The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guid.
As far as I am concerned, it is more beneficial for a traveler to go on a trip as a group under the supervision of a tour guide because not only does he knowledgeable about a specific destination but also, people enjoy the trip in a better way. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint my case.
The first reason worth mentioning is that a tour leader has a general knowledge about places travelers try to visit. He knows about cultures, beautiful locations and famous places of destination since his job are to study about it. An ordinary person who travels to an abroad city without any background knowledge can miss a lot of places. For instance, my best friend who loved traveling went to a foreign country a couple of years ago by himself and visited common places that were mentioned on the internet and missed visiting a spectacular valley that is one of the wonders of the world. Most people of the world travel to visit that place, however, since my friend did not know about it, missed it. After this experience since he missed that place, in his mind, all that money was wasted, and never again travel without a tour.
A further more subtle point is that activities in a group are more fun since you can share this experience with other people. Since people select a certain location to visit, they share a lot of common interests and can talk about it for hours. When people travel to a foreign country, there are many different foods that they can taste and try, and as a group, can share their meals which makes it more enjoyable. Also, going camping as a group is more convenient for people since the number of tasks that need to be done is high. It is plausible to share these task or even do it together. However, a person who goes camping alone can experience an arduous situation which make the trip boring for him. Another thing is that in a group you will interact and socialize with persons with distinct perspectives and sharing it make the travel more memorable.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned argument, there are more advantages for people to travel as a group by a tour leader due to information that tour leader share is severely valuable and group activities are more interesting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... travel to a foreign country, there are many different foods that they can taste and try, and ...
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Line 5, column 826, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...th distinct perspectives and sharing it make the travel more memorable. To make a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, another thing, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60598503741 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54629464034 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511221945137 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5421856442 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4375 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221982515018 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686963229089 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669795655284 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152090352072 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514431561554 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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