The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From a general point of view, today's complicated and fast developing world has imposed many anxiety and stress to people as long as its benefits. The best ways of relaxing and reducing imposed stress has always provoked many discussions and some people keep endorse the fact that staying alone for a while is a practical solution whereas others dismiss this idea. Personally, it is my firm conviction that spending time with others can works out and relive our anxiety. In what follows, I will aptly elucidate what rationales my perspective is based on.
To commerce, loneliness force us to think more about our predicaments and our stress level will mounts consequently. To put it in a vivid picture, our brain is always analyzing the matters constantly, even we are alone and nothing special happen around us. Unfortunately, human's brain naturally have tendency to pay more attention to negative and bothering subjects and feeling. Definitely, all of us has experienced this situation that trying to forget something, however, the more we try to elude from it, the more it dominants our mind and feelings. Therefore, one of the best solution to let our stress go is to create other occupations and business in order to inveigle and distort our mind from the bad feelings.
The second pivotal reason that bear in mind is that spending time with other people will provide us a situation to take advantage of their advices and experiences which can benefit us with more reassurance. In other words, loneliness probably make us believe that we are losing other opportunities and there may be other solution and matters out there that we have no signal of them. Obviously, the sense of unawareness frustrates us and disrupts our relief, even if we have problem, the situation will be more sever. Therefore, communication and association with others always keep us updated and other people's encouragement, love, accompany besides their improvisation helps us to feel shadow of happiness and relief. Taking my own example, when I had a very hard exam I was experiencing days teeming with a myriad of stress. I decided to set an appointment with my friend and confide with her. I can not say that how her advices to reliving stress before tests and his encouragement reduced my stress. Something that hardly I could gain if I had spend time alone.
To put it in a nutshell, associating with others is a better way to relive our stress. This is because not only it will distract us from experiencing bad feelings and thinking about them, but also people's assurance and love provides us better feelings and more relief.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun anxiety seems to be countable; consider using: 'many anxieties'.
Suggestion: many anxieties
...d and fast developing world has imposed many anxiety and stress to people as long as its ben...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'mount'
Suggestion: mount
... predicaments and our stress level will mounts consequently. To put it in a vivid pict...
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Line 3, column 1050, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...thing that hardly I could gain if I had spend time alone. To put it in a nutshell, a...
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Line 3, column 1050, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...thing that hardly I could gain if I had spend time alone. To put it in a nutshell, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, whereas, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92970521542 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.801803635 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53514739229 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1371555161 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.421052632 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2105263158 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116845742224 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420636683873 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480719080409 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780913193874 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043600528579 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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