childhood is the happiest time of life
If someone asks me the sweetest memories of your life is related to which period of
your age, I will tell her "My childhood", without a second of hesitation. Although I have
not forgotten the difficult times of being helpless and weak, I have some quite good
reasons for having such a positive perception, which I will elaborate subsequently.
For the starter, childhood is the golden age of having no critical responsibility. There is
no stress of due dates, no complicated professional conflict, no bill, and no payment. It
is like living in heaven. I remember that when I was a kid, I woke up late in the
morning and soon started playing with my toys, drawing things, and watching TV. It
cannot be denied that as a child I had limited skills, which made me dependent on my
parents; however, It is not that painful to overshadow the pleasure of being free of
adult life stressors.
In addition, children explore the world around them, learning how it works. It is the
most curious period of one's life, full of unknown, adventures, and excitements. I
remember that I spent long hours in our back yard, watching bugs life. It never bored
me to see how the insects found a piece of food, contact each other, line up from their
hole to the food, and carry it bit by bit until the last minuscule.
Finally, people tend to be kinder toward the kids than toward adults. They usually
forgive the mistakes made by a child, considering the immaturity and naiveness of him
or her. When I was 5-year old, my family and I were invited to dad's great aunt and I
accidentally hit a valuable crystal vase. It was shattered to powder and I burst into a loud
cry of shame. Our hostess soon arrived at the scene of the crime and, to my surprise,
she readily forgave me and kissed me to soothe my sorrow. My dad always refers to it
as the advantage of being a cute kid; otherwise, his great aunt would not forgive such
things.
In conclusion, I believe that the happiest period of life is childhood; since it is full of
sweet memories, it is the time of freedom from adults' responsibilities, and the world
seems new and bright.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: great-aunt
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Suggestion: great-aunt
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65796344648 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71614520933 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592689295039 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0643631202 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.53405017921 573% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184527104177 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046773020356 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829354546148 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443612519872 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081298859887 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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