We have different stages in our lives. From childhood until adulthood.
I do not agree that childhood is the happiest time of person’s life. I have two reasons for this essay.
First of all, childhood have many limitations on their behavior. Childhood have to accept their parents’ words and it is a duty that adults should protect their children. I do not like this point or notion. I have a good example of this. When I was young, I have many curiosity, but I was limited by my parents because I was a child. I wanted to do some activities such as jumping and running but my parents did not allow me to do so. As a result, I could not do what I wanted to do.
Next, children do not have a lot of experience unlike adults. Having a lot of experiences is a good point to live. but children have many restrictions to do these things.For example, when I was young, I wanted to go to my friends house and hang out with my classmates but my parents did not allow me.
In conclusion, being a child is not the happiest part of our lives. I believe that if we are child we cannot do what we wanted and we havr to follow our parents more than doing what we want.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun curiosity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many curiosities'.
Suggestion: many curiosities
...ample of this. When I was young, I have many curiosity, but I was limited by my parents becaus...
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Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...of experiences is a good point to live. but children have many restrictions to do t...
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Line 6, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ve many restrictions to do these things.For example, when I was young, I wanted to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 1977.66487455 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25112107623 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51883052808 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515695067265 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 618.680645161 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6205286001 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.25 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9375 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129950692738 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700123274303 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179746254405 0.0737576698707 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128501918624 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18256158796 0.0645574589148 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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