Whether you agree or not, every phase of human life has its own
importance. It starts with childhood, then adulthood and the last one is elderhood. Though each one of these has it's own fun, in my opinion, childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. I feel this way for the following reasons which I would like to explore in further paragraphs of my essay.
First of all, when we are kids we are pampered a lot by everyone around. We always get anything, for example, toys or a book or clothes, we wish for. We have our own room, where walls are decorated with our favorite cartoon and even the bedsheet that has superheroes painted on it. If I go back in time, I still remember all the toys I had organized properly in my cupboard having everything customized on my favorite cartoon theme of 'Tom & Jerry'. Ohh! Those were the real happy days. My entire day used to be filled with just enjoyment and mischiefs. Even the schooling was of fun as there was no 8-hour schedule any kid had to attend. Even at home, I used to play a lot. Being the smallest kid at my home I have hardly got scoldings from my parents.
Secondly, childhood doesn't involve any sort of responsibility. Even if you make any mistake, there is still a chance of rolling it back and correct it. As the assigned risks with such mistakes are lower, you feel less burdened. For instance, I remember a day when I broke a window glass of my neighbor while playing cricket. I went down to that
person and said I was really sorry for the loss that was caused by me and that's it. the problem was solved. I really feel happy when I'm less burdened.
To summarize this, as a child all these small things matter more than anything in the world. The happiness of a child is involved in their toys and toffees. Their day starts and ends in their favorite bed which is important to them. Playing & education are the only jobs they focus on. Overall, their happiness is not bound to a situation or a place but on their own small world created by them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, i feel, sort of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37066666667 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40918030693 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570666666667 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6864400021 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.56 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.48 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111180244341 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029072686736 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797674649228 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06925663422 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874119802637 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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