childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. do u agree or disagree?
Childhood, being the inevitable part of one’s life it is either filled with happiness to some of them where it’s the other way around to the rest. Although, I agree that childhood is the happiest times of a person’s life because of the following reasons,
Firstly, I had the best days of my life when I was a child. I’m grateful to my parents for providing me with all the comforts and raising me well. During the childhood days it was all about school, homework, playing games running around the house causing troubles which was pretty fun. Moreover the summer holidays was the most memorable part. All my cousins would stay at my place where we would stay up late playing games on streets at midnight like badminton, or ludo, hide and seek and many more.
As a child all I got was love and affection from everyone. My grandparents especially, the bonding between me and my grandparents was much adorable, I was always with my grandparents. They always told me stories before bed. The times during festivals where everyone would come exchange sweets and gifts, life was amazing in childhood. The family tours we took on holidays it still feels so fresh in my mind. Only the thought of thinking about the childhood days brings me back to life these days.
Childhood was all about innocence, full of love, and fun at its most. Additionally, as a child there was nothing to worry about as parents would take care of everything for us. Perhaps now as an adult the only thing I do is worrying about job, career, and life.
On the contrary, some of the children might have had a hard childhood because of poverty, they might struggle to even survive without food for days. Say it because of fate? Or is it because of the children’s parents didn’t think about critical finance problems.
In conclusion, being said that a child is a form of god on earth. I believe that irrespective of the children’s fate every child must have a happy childhood. It is the memorable and the happiest times of a person’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75910364146 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72538799501 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532212885154 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0976698731 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9047619048 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192602487026 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064802582348 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106484607255 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118679657777 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919185219628 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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