Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives.
Automobiles, bicycles, airplanes.
In my opinion, among above vehicles, airplane has the most significant influence on people’s lives. It is the fastest, safes and most convenient form of transportation. It can carry both people and cargoes from one continent to another in only a few hours. I do believe that invention of plane was the most important achievement of humans in the past century and has changed our life dramatically based on three main reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
The first and most important reason is that it has improved the international trade between countries significantly. Global managers can easily travel from one country to another without having any trouble. For example, I know a businessman who lives in London but founded his corporation in the US. He come backs to London by flight and meets his family every weekends. The boosting of business in not the only achievement of airplane. It also helps improve of science. A lot of scientists and scholars go abroad for international congress and seminars where they can exchange their information about the latest discoveries in various fields and declines.
As a second reason I would like to mention that airplanes help governments fight against terrorism groups. An airplane can carry more than 200 soldiers and these militants can kill terrorists in a few hours. So this kind of transportation makes our world a safer and better place to live.
Finally it is important to bear in mind that, plane provides a great opportunity for us to go abroad and visit other counties easily. Nowadays, many people travel to other countries for different reasons such as relaxation and becoming familiar with other cultures and traditions. Last year, I had a trip to Singapore with a cheap flight. It only took 6 hours and I really enjoyed that travel and it was my most unforgettable trip in my whole life.
Taking all the aforementioned into account, it can be concluded that among various vehicles such as automobiles, bicycles, trains and airplanes, the latter has had the most important effect on our lives based on the reasons which I outlined above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...orld a safer and better place to live. Finally it is important to bear in mind that, p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01690140845 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91666166954 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594366197183 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7116029186 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7368421053 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102301930771 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245715418485 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381812533277 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566297167975 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499345761465 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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