Animals rights is most discussed and one of the highly debated topics in most of the television programs and few magazines. With the cutting of trees and spreading of industrialization as well as societyhood, animals are on the verge of extinction, whereas most of the species have already been extict or fall in the category of endangered species. Thus, to my opinion zoos are the best place for these animals, making it most fittest place for their survival by looking at the adverse conditions today. Ample amount of reasons justify in order to support the idea. Below mentioned are few among plentitudes of a reason.
Firstly, the environmental factor poses a great threat to the jungle species and other animal species existing on our planet. With human technology emerging as a trend, there have been a lot of dangers emerging as well resulting in global warming of our planet and indirectly affecting the live of these animals. In such a case, zoo is the only home for these animals where they are taken care of and treated properly with medicinal and other amenities required for their survival. For instance, animals have been moving towards cities due to humans demolishing jungles for cutting trees and spreading townships, as a result disturbing personal life of animals and making jungles quite small to live in for a lot of species, and because animals too follow area ownership for a particular range of land, with jungles declining other animals are forced to move out of the jungle for their survival. The adverse effects of gloabal warming has also resulted in the vaporization of lakes and rivers, the vital source of their day-to-day life, this enforces animals to a constrained set of living or fighting for the remains of natural sources left in the area. Thereby increasing animals death rate.
Secondly, illegal animal trafficking by humans in most parts of the world is resulting in extinction of species of tigers for skin, elephants for tusk and other species. In this scenario, only place left safe for these animals is zoo, where they are guarded all the time. Not only this endangered species like panda are often provided with nanny in these zoo to take care of them with all that is needed, and in few years these zoo keepers have been able to prevent them from declining as a endangered species category into a balanced animal species category.
Threfore, the conclusion of asserted points above is only that the zoo is the most secure, happy, and a healthy home for the animals, because humans have enforced environment to turn against these animals and thus it becomes our duty as well as responsibility to protect them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 423, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'fittest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: fittest
...best place for these animals, making it most fittest place for their survival by looking at ...
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Line 1, column 423, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the fittest'.
Suggestion: most the fittest
...best place for these animals, making it most fittest place for their survival by looking at ...
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Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to follow'?
Suggestion: to follow
...r a lot of species, and because animals too follow area ownership for a particular range o...
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Line 3, column 1176, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...es left in the area. Thereby increasing animals death rate. Secondly, illegal animal...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this zoo' or 'these zoos'?
Suggestion: this zoo; these zoos
... panda are often provided with nanny in these zoo to take care of them with all that is n...
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Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... able to prevent them from declining as a endangered species category into a bala...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92222222222 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6026017372 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495555555556 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.9537714738 48.9658058833 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.666666667 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180150339405 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689446122298 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369328795606 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122806065358 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131721588955 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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