Co-workers are the people who work with us together. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good co-worker? Use specific details and examples in your answer

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Co-workers are the people who work with us together. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good co-worker? Use specific details and examples in your answer

Nowadays, nearly all adults spend majority of their time at their office. How much they enjoy being in the office depends on the work environment, especially the attitude of the people around them. A ‘good’ co-worker is a person who can make someone’s time in the office much more worthwhile. In this essay, I will elaborate on the qualities that I believe make someone a good co-worker.

Firstly, a good co-worker is dependable. A dependable is person is much easier to work with. He will meet the deadlines, work diligently and correct their own mistakes. A dependable person is also trustworthy. He will provide constructive criticism instead of mocking you when you make a mistake. He will give new idea and ways to tackle problems and broaden your mind.

Secondly, teamwork is a common occurrence at a work place; therefore, it is essential for a colleague to be a team player. A team player is someone who is comfortable working with others and makes sure his teammates are agree with the plan and are comfortable executing it. Having a team player as a colleague is beneficial for a person. He will support you when you are over-burdened with work, will encourage healthy risk taking and help you to improve upon your skills. A good colleague will help you become more productive and valuable member of the organisation.

Most importantly, a good coworker is organised and well-mannered. After all, who likes to have a messy and loud co-worker? He respect others boundaries and never forces himself into a conversation. A good colleague does not brag about his work or exaggerate about his value in the organisation.

In summary, a good co-worker is the one who is well-mannered, dependable, and a team player. He is someone who wants the good of everyone and helps them become better employees.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...environment, especially the attitude of the people around them. A 'good' co-worker is a pers...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...the attitude of the people around them. A 'good' co-worker is a person ...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...irstly, a good co-worker is dependable. A dependable is person is much easier to work with. ...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...others and makes sure his teammates are agree with the plan and are comfortable execu...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'respects'.
Suggestion: respects
... to have a messy and loud co-worker? He respect others boundaries and never forces hims...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, after all, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98692810458 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06168515939 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1228533899 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254928459088 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796083187445 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813875388137 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151736023562 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339725090268 0.0645574589148 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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