Some people like to only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Some people prefer to play safe and continue doing what they are good at, while other leave their comfort zone to try new things. In my opinion, trying new things is a better decision. In this essay, I will elaborate on my opinion by giving few benefits of trying new things.
Firstly, trying new things can help a person overcome his fears. Trying a new thing pushes a person out of his comfort zone, which makes the person feel uncomfortable and scared. However, after experiencing the ‘new thing’ the person realizes that fear is just a small obstacle in his journey to experience something new. This knowledge then encourages him to try other things. To support this point, I will cite the chapter from my English textbook, ‘The Deep Waters’ by William Douglas. In the chapter, Douglas described his journey of overcoming his fear of water. After overcoming his fear, he used his fear to motivate himself to go further. In the end, he only quoted Roosevelt, ‘only thing we have to fear is the fear itself’. Therefore, overcoming his fear not only allowed Douglas to to go swimming without feeling sick, it also gave him courage to try other things in life.
Secondly, trying new things can help a person get to know himself better. It can help him find his strengths, weaknesses and motivations. Trying new things can assist a person to find or stimulate his creative side. This creativity can then be utilized in other fields. Learning about himself can help a person decide what they want to do in life, which may prove beneficial in the future.
Thirdly, it can keep a person from getting bored. Even the most routine-loving person can sometimes get tired of following the same schedule every day. So trying something new can give a much-needed break from the same old routine. Trying new things can also help a person release all the pent-up emotions. Following the same routine everyday can cause make a person frustrated and angry. These emotions if not released from time to time can cause outbursts. Therefore, it is crucial for a person to release these emotions. What can be a better way to do this than exploring new things?
In the end, I believe trying new things is equivalent to self-improvement. It pushes us to become better individuals and attain our full potential. Therefore, it is crucial that we try new new things and experience everything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, while, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89731051345 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71065904887 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498777506112 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.536339626 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5357142857 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6071428571 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198263725752 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629483898643 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641038980959 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131982913182 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643947579499 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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