A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is very challenging for company administrators to decide how to spend their money. However, companies should use their money to protect environment. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in following essay.
To begin with, most of human economic activities have affected nature negatively especially by a huge group named company. Earth is already being deteriorated because of many economic foctors such as factories and foundries etc. Even if they do not have any factory, they are responsible of current consequence a little at least. For example, the famous corporation Google, not any other part of Alphabet.Inc, provides search service online and earn the money through many commercials. It seems like they do not make any noxious substance to possibly worse globe. However, their data centers use a lot of electrocity and subsequently is responsible of generating power and uses of many energy source such as fossile, gas and nuclear etc. As a result, that company is partially responsible of devastateing of our nature.
Moreover, nowadays most of people consider protecting environment is important. So often the reputation that whether the company pays attention to environment affect their revenue indirectly. For instance, in south korea some company threw away their dertimental chemical waste in river illegally, even they knew that is really venomous to wildlife. As a result, many people had bad image to the company, subsequently boycotted their commodities. So it diminish their reputation and revenue. They officially had press conference and apologized but it didn't work. As a result, it showed whether paying attention to nature affect business indirectly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, really, so, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 266.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43233082707 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99005502963 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2924527898 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137085648828 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048023341736 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754970662472 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110432835276 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702111830165 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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