Compare the advantages of marrying at young age to marrying at an older age. State and support your preference.
Nowadays, young people do not like very much the idea of marrying. They prefer enjoy they youth without commitments. Most of them are afraid to loss their free in the best stage of their life. It is very popular in this age having numerous relationships just for sex or passing the time. Meantime, I believe the 30’s is the best age to marry.
Although there are many couples who decided to get marry when they were young, civil polls show the most of those end up broking. Many of those young people were just excited by their feeling and they did not know what really imply getting married and make a family. I think the love, besides to be the main feeling, is not the only one taking into account when a couple decide passing the rest of their life together. The respect, feeling comfortable with each other and supporting each other in the worst situation is very important too. People are not perfect, the successful of a relationship is to know our partner’s flaw and even so still in love with him.
Besides the high likelihood to fail, getting married while we are young has their advantages. If it does not work we still have time to meet somebody else and not to make the same mistakes. An individual learn of their own mistakes, and this age of our life is the perfect time to correct them. Other benefit is that we have more time to enjoy together before to plain making a family. Building a family requires time and conditions, a couple needs to secure the best environment to it.
On the other side, there are people like me who prefer wait a little more until getting married. We would like to enjoy our youth without any commitments and maybe we get to know somebody special in the way. Besides, passing time together knowing each other very well and building a confidence relationship until deciding to take the big step is very important. In addition, in an older age an individual have more time for having his career, getting a house, a perfect job and other things very important when we want to build a family.
To sum up, besides the advantages of each age to get married, I think everybody knows the perfect time for them. I prefer to wait and pursue my personal dreams first. Maybe in the way I know “the one”. The age does not really matter.
Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'while', 'even so', 'i think', 'in addition', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.17211328976 0.229887763892 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.191721132898 0.158761421928 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0980392156863 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0740740740741 0.046263068375 160% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0740740740741 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0893246187364 0.118717715034 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0501089324619 0.0351676179071 142% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37680162402 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0435729847495 0.0309702414327 141% => OK
Particles: 0.00435729847495 0.00188951952338 231% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.104575163399 0.0887237588012 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00217864923747 0.0209618222197 10% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0130718954248 0.0139019557991 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2293.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 413.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55205811138 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.271186440678 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.200968523002 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.118644067797 0.174417080927 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0750605326877 0.112833075102 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37680162402 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493946731235 0.524397521467 94% => OK
Word variations: 54.395966672 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9565217391 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5402127191 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6956521739 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9565217391 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 38.0533740394 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 0.916666666667 1.45489161554 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274876980327 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0857968120042 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.058716448206 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492351549017 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101334510171 0.151897553556 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103000344273 0.114077575197 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522574694687 0.0781384742642 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.374363640011 0.336927656856 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0397841992416 0.067059652881 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191793155423 0.210909579961 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330466075961 0.0618886996521 53% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30