consulting with others or making decision alone
Some important turning point in our life is happened when we make decision about some important topics by which all our efforts paid off or back fired. By seeing this, it is very vital for people to try their best to decide in a profitable way. Some people always do their task in a solitary way even making decision in a crucial point of their life. But there are another group that get help from other people in order to find best decision. I, personally, subscribe one Persian quotation which said on hand has no sound – or, to put it another way, the people can use advices made by other people can decide in more guaranteed way. So I prefer to consult with others people about my important life issues because of assurance of finding better way.
Firstly, human beings live in their restricted mind, following turn their way in some limited ways are experienced by them. Without any shadow of doubt, consultation with other people lead to broaden our perspective and receive their useful point of view. One of the most significant result of this is that we learn how to view life differently and make decision by considering more dimension of the topic. Additionally, we cannot experience everything because of our limited time and also its probably bad permanent effect, for this reason use of others people's experiences benefit us. Besides we can find our wrong thoughts by talking with others. All of these bring more opportunity to make the best decision for us.
Secondly, psychologically speaking, if we talk with some reliable people in our critical points of life we would be more peaceful. Due to the fact that humankinds intrinsically are in need of supporting in hard time, it is important to communicate with other people and consult with them to feel no loneliness. Sometimes, we have some tough time and we are in dilemma, if we didn’t have any loyal friends to rely on them, we would be upset and become depressed. In this condition we will see the world awful that we leave alone there even by making good decision for our life. In fact, consulting with other people gift us having social life and getting closer to others people. Involving friends in our both happiness and sadness, cause tied relationship with them which give us more satisfied life.
In summary, consulting with others about our important decisions, will have many advantages because of its good mentally effects and receiving broaden points of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a profitable way" with adverb for "profitable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... for people to try their best to decide in a profitable way. Some people always do their task in a ...
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Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a solitary way" with adverb for "solitary"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e way. Some people always do their task in a solitary way even making decision in a crucial point...
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Line 1, column 374, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...nt of their life. But there are another group that get help from other people in orde...
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Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
... others peoples experiences benefit us. Besides we can find our wrong thoughts by talki...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82897862233 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5848076603 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532066508314 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0333794159 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1578947368 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29636483197 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103744417641 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768207396011 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199714815239 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355471508251 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.