Describe an object that is very special in your life. Explain why this object is important to you. Include details and examples in your explanation.
Most of the people have some object that has an importance on their lives. It can be anything! A ring, a car, a book, and etc. I fell that a mint lace dress in an important object in my life for two reasons. First, it was a present from someone special. Fallowing I will be more detailed in my topics. Second, I felt fabulous wearing it in a special day.
First, this was a present from my grandmother. It is not uncommon to fell attached in a present given by a family member or a close friend. That object is able to bring memories and comfort. For example, my grandma knew that I needed a dress which I could wear during my graduation. Then, she started to search for a perfect dress to me because she knew that we had similar tastes even being born in different generations. One day, I that I was not busy I decided to visit her. When I entered the house, she seemed excited and told that had a surprise. Following, she took me to her bedroom where I found that amazing dress layed on the bed. She made the best choice, the dress was perfect. We spent an amazing evening together talking about my graduation, my dress, and our lives. That was one of the last visitations I did in the house of that sweet old lady house before she deceased. Nowadays, when I look to this dress, I remember about that day.
Second, I wore this beautiful dress on my university graduation celebration. In my home country, Brazil, the students take very seriously the clothing that they will wear in the party manny people complimented and told how I looked beautiful. That night was unforgettable, and this dress makes the memories more vivid. graduation night. All the family, friends, and professors are going to be there, so the students wish to look fabulous. For instance, while I was getting ready for the party, I could see in the mirror how the lace dress that my grandmother gave to me fitted perfectly on my body. The dress also had deep mint color and delicate lace valorizing my skin color. To complete the look, I wore golden jewelry and black high hill shoes. When I arrived at the
Concluding, often a person poses important objects in their lives. I consider my mint lace dress an important object that I have. It not only bring good memories from my prom night but also of my sweet grandmother.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...can be anything! A ring, a car, a book, and etc. I fell that a mint lace dress in an imp...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Graduation
...is dress makes the memories more vivid. graduation night. All the family, friends, and pro...
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Line 5, column 750, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lden jewelry and black high hill shoes. When I arrived at the Concluding, often a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213389121339 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.152719665272 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0857740585774 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0313807531381 0.046263068375 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.121338912134 0.0685040099705 177% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0941422594142 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0313807531381 0.0351676179071 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52119165823 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0230125523013 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0983263598326 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010460251046 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167364016736 0.0139019557991 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2301.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 421.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46555819477 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.280285035629 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20190023753 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.130641330166 0.174417080927 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0783847980998 0.112833075102 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52119165823 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515439429929 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 58.0639222592 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6684587814 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0333333333 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.523164526 48.84282405 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7 120.699889404 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0333333333 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.644075263715 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 34.2233570863 45.7405998639 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.1095890411 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221929558742 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0653616888338 0.103427244359 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0580168077799 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.384691507699 0.497263757937 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122472098388 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734334485674 0.114077575197 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652826087783 0.0781384742642 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294012143662 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.12116914645 0.067059652881 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163600742026 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525483296177 0.0618886996521 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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