Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many of us honestly believe that parents are the best teachers. Although this statement has some reasons to exist in particular when we speak about early childhood, professional educators have some unquestionable advantages such as professional knowledge about their subject and specific experience with students which make them better teachers than parents.
To begin with, we cannot underestimate a role of parents in upbringing of a child. In fact, biologically children are prone to mimic and copy behavior of their relatives. As a result, parents teach their offspring to social norms and customs and traditions. To illustrate the impact of parents, we may imagine that two siblings who were born simultaneously from the same mother are brought up by different parents, who belong to distinct cultures, the children will demonstrate different behavior which reflects norms of families in which they were bought up. In other words, parents have strong influence on children and therefore can be considered as teachers. However, may we aver that they are the best ones?
As far as I am concerned, the answer on this question is "no" because parents' expertise and knowledge is limited. By contrast, professional teachers have more profound knowledge about their field. For instance, an average parent may struggle to explain laws of physics even if the parent knows them. At the same time, a teacher of physics who was taught to work with children or/and adolescents will be able to give the material in the way which suits to children’s abilities. From this view point a professional educator has a strong advantage because he or she has not only knowledge about the subject studied but also possesses understanding of children's psychology as well.
Finally, educators who often spend their lives by teaching youngsters acquire indispensable expertise in this activity. To illustrate the idea, imagine that all your life you have being painted cars. This experience will give you profound understanding about the fields: kinds of paints, their characteristics etc. The expertise may allow the painter to choose the best paint in each case. In the same vein, educator is able to find a key to each student. By contrast, parents who probably have only one child cannot have such volume of experience.
In conclusion, although parents definitely have some effect on children, they cannot be seen as the best teachers owing to the fact that they have not got adequate expertise and knowledge about upbringing of children.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'honestly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'in particular', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in other words', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245652173913 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.154347826087 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0739130434783 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0521739130435 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.05 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128260869565 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0282608695652 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92572271927 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326086956522 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00434782608696 0.00188951952338 230% => OK
Determiners: 0.0847826086957 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0239130434783 0.0209618222197 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0217391304348 0.0139019557991 156% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2543.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 406.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26354679803 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369458128079 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.315270935961 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.243842364532 0.174417080927 140% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15763546798 0.112833075102 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92572271927 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539408866995 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.3980288346 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9940275301 48.84282405 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.15 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 0.644075263715 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 51.8270935961 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.56779661017 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318101285129 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0712120232413 0.103427244359 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0603873070171 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474407395392 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181485744319 0.151897553556 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115112094495 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630859752743 0.0781384742642 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.306954935808 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0367121866232 0.067059652881 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205785055254 0.210909579961 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234470835377 0.0618886996521 38% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.