Do you agree with foods that are ready or home-made
Nowadays food is easier to prepare at home as a general rule. People can prepare food at home without any help of others. Students can easily prepare their food and do not waste time at home. I agree with this sentence that because it is easier to prepare food, students are not staying home to have prepared food and enjoy their meals with their family.
First of all, most of the students are trying the colleges far from their home. It will be really time consuming for them to come back home for food and they prefer to spend this time studying. They prefer to go out with their friends and enjoy their meal with peers. Especially in between classes they can find a place to eat out or even go tocinema and have some fun with friends.
Furthermore, world today changed in a way that time is precious , students who are young prefer to put prepared food in microwave and soon after eat their food and go back to study. They can even cook in less than 15 minutes the day before exam and prepare for exam.
On the other hand, there is no question that food that is prepared at home is healthier because it has fresh nutrients. Compassion between family is stronger after they have food together. The students can go for weekend and have this companionship with family and bring some food for their week and warm them during the week.
In summary, I strongly believe that it is too personal and it is shameful to judge for public but if in future I have a child I will encourage her to cook on her/his own during being a student.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Especially in between classes they can find a place to eat out or even go tocinema and have some fun with friends.
Error: tocinema Suggestion: cinema
flaws:
1. No. of Words: 285 while No. of Different Words: 143
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
2. Need a full essay topic. There is no 'students' in the essay topic.
3. More compound or complex sentences/clauses wanted. Try not to use pronouns like 'you, I, they...' as the subject of a sentence.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 285 350
No. of Characters: 1220 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.109 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.281 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.097 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 68 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.657 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.64 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y changed in a way that time is precious , students who are young prefer to put pr...
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Line 8, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... bring some food for their week and warm them during the week. In summary, I s...
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Line 10, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ourage her to cook on her/his own during being a student.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'in summary', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217105263158 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.1875 0.158761421928 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0625 0.0866891130778 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0493421052632 0.046263068375 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0822368421053 0.0685040099705 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144736842105 0.118717715034 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0263157894737 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.17094612533 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0361842105263 0.0309702414327 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00657894736842 0.00188951952338 348% => OK
Determiners: 0.0625 0.0887237588012 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0230263157895 0.0209618222197 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00986842105263 0.0139019557991 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1544.0 2387.08602151 65% => OK
No of words: 285.0 408.028673835 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41754385965 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.249122807018 0.338922669872 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.185964912281 0.251872472559 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.112280701754 0.174417080927 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0385964912281 0.112833075102 34% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.17094612533 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505263157895 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 49.5746029557 59.2087087015 84% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3571428571 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1243604336 48.84282405 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 38.9536340852 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.21649484536 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132789518925 0.300154397459 44% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150197029515 0.103427244359 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0890082631416 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.597084499473 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15245377546 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585056250007 0.114077575197 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454919129555 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278758672395 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0531957090638 0.067059652881 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794309654189 0.210909579961 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048875768536 0.0618886996521 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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