Nobody can live well without friends, who provide us with entertainment and support. Some people have the ability to keep in touch with a small part of friends for a long time while others are good at making new friends easily. With the introverted characteristic, I strongly agree with that the latter ability is more essential for happiness.
First and foremost, making many new friends easily results a quick accustom to new environments. People should face all kinds of new environments independently as they grow up gradually, such as high school, college and companies. Strong network ability means acquiring help and absorbing new information easily, subsequently causing the absence of lonely mood. Specifically, new graduates going to work are easy to be lonely, since they leave their familiar atmosphere and friends even kindred, transfer to an unfamiliar stage of life, and face with difficult social hardship. Outer personality helps new graduates making many new friends, who provide plenty of work and life experience, like how to communicate with our boss and which places of houses have low rents. Therefore, new grads will get through hardship more easily with new friends’ help.
Second, having new friendship easily broadens people’s social network and benefits their career path. That is to say, becoming friends with others easily helps people learning extensive knowledge from all kinds of fields, broadening one’s horizon, thus pointing out a clear choice of career. For example, students in the forth year are normally going into society with an opaque plan to the future. Those who have advantages of social participate in many internships and career activities in order to add many relevant workers’ social accounts. Therefore, from chatting with them directly about the salaries and development of particular industry, students consider clearly about their own willing and plan excellent career path for the future.
Finally, people’s physical and mental health are also tightly associated with making new friends easily. Because having brave to communicate with strange people represents confidence, which helps people stay away from self-locked. Take my college classmate as an example, she was so introverted that dared to talk to strangers, always staying at her comfort zone. As time passes, she became accustomed to invariant life and had no friends in our university, feeling lonely and self-abased, which influenced her health severely.
Admittedly, although keeping in touch with a small group of people is precious to some extent, different life experiences make it harder to maintain long-term friendships. In the end, people are bound to become distant with each other. Therefore, the ability of making new friends easily is more important to one’s happiness as far as adaptation to new environments easily, a wide social network and a healthy life are concerned.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2473.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43516483516 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79056495127 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564835164835 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.338019988 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.761904762 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378944736667 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119134478251 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815521544499 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232338971767 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928610739646 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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