Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be
required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is
With the advancement of technology and the process of modernization of the world, the acceleration of lifestyle changes in the world has increased significantly compared to previous centuries and has caused more people in the world to distance themselves from their ancestors and past history. Thus Proper and effective education plays a key role in creating a connection between the current and past generations. Since the university is the manifestation of science and culture of a country, it is responsible for maintaining the connection between different generations. Therefore, I consider it necessary for the students to learn history at the university, regardless of the scientific orientation of the people.i will mention my reasons for my postion:
In the first place, it should be said that creating a healthy and problem-free society with prosperity and freedom, which is the most important characteristic of human beings, is not possible except by learning from the past events of the world. Man has overcome many dangers and obstacles to grow in today's world and has gone through many tragedies. If society becomes acquainted with a large part of these obstacles, it will try not to face such problems again. For example, various revolutions, bloody wars and great famines, each of which has claimed millions of lives, and if history is forgotten, we will return to these cases and bitter experiences will be repeated. On the other hand, knowing the past is the key to predicting the future. Knowing the thoughts and heritage left by our past generations can lead us in different directions and experience different lives without really having lived them and causing to make better decision .to sum up my statement. To conclude my speech, I would like to refer to a famous sentence that I deeply believe in: A nation that does not know its history is doomed to repeat it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... from their ancestors and past history. Thus Proper and effective education plays a ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 717, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he scientific orientation of the people.i will mention my reasons for my postion:...
^
Line 2, column 923, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...ut really having lived them and causing to make better decision .to sum up my statement...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 946, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...them and causing to make better decision .to sum up my statement. To conclude my s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0935483871 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95721309026 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.360343884 48.9658058833 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.9 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0495598923999 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0152863819325 0.076458572812 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023870713082 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397065808214 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00718474993398 0.0645574589148 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 11.7677419355 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.