Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words.
Do not use memorized examples.
There is no shortage of opinion on the important considerations in a relationship. Many people have different beliefs on what could be considered of greatest importance in any relationship. In today’s world, being loyal is not just a virtue, but at times, a rarity among people. In my opinion, I believe that honesty in the most important requirement in a relationship for two main reasons, which I’ll address in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, honesty enables trust and belief on you by the other person. You don’t easily earn trust by someone. But once, that trust on you is developed in them, they believe you even if the world goes against you. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been deeply influenced by my own personal experience. My relationship with my parents hasn’t always been sweet. During my childhood days, I have lied to my parents regarding my score cards and grades, just so that I can avoid criticism from them. I used to even think that they may stop loving me, if they came to know that I’ve got bad grades at school. Later, at one point, I understood that they’ll always love me no matter what. That affection is innate and it doesn’t depend on my grades or performances. I felt guilty about my previous wrongdoings and confessed the same to my parents. Only then, did I know that, they had already known that I had been lying to them. They didn’t want to know me to know that, since I would feel very bad about it. From then on, I’ve never lied to them, and they’re very well aware of it. As a result, they always trust me, and this had hardened our relationship. For this reason, honesty is a core component in a relationship.
Secondly, loyality strengthens the bond. Drawing from my own experience, I’m still in contact with my primary school friends. Loyality is the backbone of our friendship. Our honesty towards others has strengthened our bonding among us, and has brought our friendship this long. I would consider my friends as my most important people after my family. Due to this very reason, I believe that I have people to fall back on, in case of any adversary. It’s certainly clear to see that being truthful builds strong connections.
In conclusion, truth is the most important aspect in a relationship, due to its ability to build trust, and make relationships more stronger. I would suggest people to always be true in their relationship, since the other person would accept you as you are.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the greatest'.
Suggestion: of the greatest
...ent beliefs on what could be considered of greatest importance in any relationship. In toda...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...sweet. During my childhood days, I have lied to my parents regarding my score cards ...
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Line 3, column 1055, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
... bad about it. From then on, I’ve never lied to them, and they’re very well aware of...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
... to build trust, and make relationships more stronger. I would suggest people to always be tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76036866359 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75409918645 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8905477368 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7857142857 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133970903694 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393378536932 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356050215908 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101344975246 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362771430497 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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