Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are several important factors that are considered in relationships. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely choose to tell the truth always to be the most important consideration for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
First, going by the popular saying, “The truth will always set you free”. Telling the truth has a way of liberating someone eventually in any situation. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was working as a salesperson in a retail store, I once attended to a particular customer that insisted that he has paid me for an item he took, whereas, he hadn’t and was insisting on it. It drew the attention of our manager and for him to calm the situation, he asked the customer to go with the item since he maintained that paid me. The money for the item was deducted from my wage for the day despite my plea that I did not receive any money from the customer. The very next day, the customer returned to our store pleading with me that he later saw the money in his pocket. He returned the money and gave me a huge sum of money. My manager felt embarrassed and at the same time pleased with me. As a result, I was appraised and promoted for that month. If I had not stood by the truth that the customer had not paid me for the item, I would not have been promoted nor appraised.
Secondly, Telling the truth makes you valued. People tend to respect and admire you when you are known for saying the truth. Drawing from my own experience, I come from a family of four siblings and I am the last child. Each of my siblings has their strengths and capabilities, but I was known to always tell the truth irrespective of the situation. This made my parents love me in a special way. If I was not known for telling the truth always, I probably would not have a special place in my parent’s hearts.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that telling the truth always is the most important consideration in relationships.
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...situation. This made my parents love me in a special way. If I was not known for telling the tru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, as a result, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47028423773 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70894711296 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483204134367 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6285170502 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159875647191 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609024354775 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648002496572 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140577408941 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549426002178 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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