Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

We are born into a complex, demanding world. Although some may argue that white lies can be beneficial, I strongly support the statement. I think that solid relationships are built on trust. My view is based on the personal ground, and in the subsequent paragraphs, I will support my major reasons with examples.

First of all, meaningful and fulfilling relationships are crucial for human beings, and one of the necessary ingredients for them is trust. Without trust, you cannot build and strengthen your connections with others. Additionally, a lack of connections with others can have negative and long-lasting results, such as the loss of people you care about. My personal experience demonstrates how easy you can disturb your friendship with lies. A few years back, one of my close friends at the time promised me that she would never tell my secret to anyone. But she was not telling the truth and talked about it with her partner. Her decision to betray me was hurtful and inconsiderate; therefore, our close relationship was not as strong as before. It is possible that if this had not happened in my life, I would have had a different attitude towards this topic.

Secondly, telling the truth can help people to avoid future problems. Snowball effect - one lie usually follows the other, and sooner than you know, you end up tangled in a net full of false truths. A story of a boy who yelled "a lion is coming" too many times is a perfect example of the profound influence of truthtelling. To illustrate, as a child, I liked to pretend that I was sick because I wanted the attention of my parents. Every time, they took me to see a doctor, and he always concluded that I was healthy, and as a result, my parents were hesitant to trust me. One day, I asked them to walk me home from church because I was feeling sick, but of course, they refused. After we came home, my temperature raised to 39 degrees, and they took me to take to the hospital. They would have trusted me at the beginning if I had not told so many lies.

In this essay, I discussed my beliefs that telling the truth is always the best option. I feel this way not just because lies can hurt your relationships but also because they can make you less trustworthy.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i feel, i think, of course, such as, you know, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6425 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72796527034 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5725 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5184385969 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4090909091 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164700299081 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496880129351 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423554839379 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106522216434 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241356862339 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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