Been living for some decades now, I have come to realized that lies can always lead to unexpectedly undesirable outcomes. The act of lying has never been considered the right thing to do, especially in relationships. I am of the opinion that being honest is vitally important in building and maintaining any relationship, from family to friendship and partnership.
First, as mentioned before, telling lies can never bring us to a better position in the end. It might be beneficial or convenient to make up a fake piece of information in order to deal with one's wrong acts, yet it will never turn out well in the end. In fact, we can't protect our lies forever as they don't even exist in the first place. Sooner or later, one's lies will be discovered and might ruin the relationship they were trying to save by being dishonest. I have to admit that my feelings were influenced by my own experience in the relationship with my best friend. I caught my best friend hanging out with another classmate of us, which was a totally normal thing to do since she has the right to befriend with anyone she likes. However, it was her choosing to deceive me several times instead of just letting me know that made me lose faith on her. In the end, I didn't think we could continue being best friends although I knew she lied about hanging out with another friend because she didn't want me to be upset. If only she had told me the truth, I wouldn't have felt disappointed and hopeless about our relationship. The border between truth and untruth is slim and can tear any close bond apart.
On the other hand, I believe by committing to always share true information with each other, we choose to protect and build stronger relationships with our people. Once we have established the rule for being honest with our family, friends or partners, we are more encouraged to avoid doing what can upset our beloveds. Even if we unintentionally did some thing terribly wrong, being straight-forward and telling them the truth is a better approach to solve the problem than spending time generating elaborate lies. That way, not only can we live without feeling afraid of being exposed one day, we also have a better chance to make up for what we are honestly sorry about. In fact, people are more appreciative of being informed the truth than receiving untrue words from the mouth of whom they care about. Perhaps after what has happened, we know the other treasures and wishes to maintain the connection as much as we do.
In conclusion, one of the most important values to take into consideration when it comes to building and maintaining any relationship is sincerity and honesty. Unlike deception which only lead us to nowhere in the long run, honesty is key in protecting and keeping the relationship stable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Suggestion: didn't
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Suggestion: wouldn't
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Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, honestly, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71224489796 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69588746912 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54693877551 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.595895861 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.952380952 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138348533197 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454200419075 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365781228513 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928526104123 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167465480354 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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