Being loyal can make people to trust and believe each other. Always telling the truth in any relationship is important. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, telling the truth in any relationship can make the relationship stronger and powerful. Nowadays, in any relationship, the most important thing is being loyal to each other and if we want to have a loyal and a strong relationship, we have to always tell the truth. My own life experience is a good example of this. When I was 12 years old, I failed my mathematics exam, and I did not inform my parents about it. After one week my parents took part in parents meeting and the teacher informed them about it and they got mad at me it was not for the failure it was because I was disloyal with them and after that time they could not believe in me even I was telling them the truth they could not believe it. Telling the truth is the most important element in any relationship.
Second, telling the truth can bring happiness and prosperity to any relationship. Telling the truth will make people happy because they will feel that they love each other and they can trust each other, and their relationship is based on love and truth. My own life experience is a good example of this. When my girlfriend told me about her problem at university she had with the teacher I was thrilled because I told myself that she loves me and she thinks I am the one who can help her, so we solved the problem together and I realized that after that time I felt a different happiness and prosperity in our life. Telling the truth is the important element which will strengthen any relationship.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that always telling the truth in any relationship is very important. This is because telling the truth in any relationship will strengthen it and bring happiness and prosperity to any relationship.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59011627907 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68418181273 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389534883721 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4424301239 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243951570397 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129996683404 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108884484946 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183783013973 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449593278531 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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