Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific examples and reasons to support your opinions.
Truth is the most potent and indispensable virtue in this planet. The influences and effects of truth is far-reaching and fruitful to reconcile any odds in our society, country and world. The practice to tell the truth is the most important thing in any relationship is the given statement-some would agree others would not agree with this. In my view, practicing to tell the truth is the most prerequisite in any kinds of relation because of the following two crucial reasons.
The main reason is that telling truth is always rewarding. In many instances in our life, we see the people who tell the truth is likable and they are treated with utmost honor and their behavior is reminded from century to century and also their accomplishment has been used to teach the world. For example, when I was reading in class nine, I was reading a story about the prophet of Muhammad in Islam. I learnt that, he was known for the symbol of truth and the people in Arab called him a nickname “Al-amin” means believable. And on that time Arab people were submerged by different crimes, disbelief and atrocities. So, Muhammad was the only man who was believable and they kept their precious belongings to Muhammad and he kept these in utmost honesty. This lesson taught me an important lesson in my life, whatever happens in my life always try to keep the word and tell the truth and get the peoples mind.
Another reason is that, telling truth is helps to shield the possible catastrophe in our society. There many types of infliction, atrocities is always happening in our society due to the inclination no to tell the truth. For instance, a few days ago I have been reading an article from New York Times. The article states that they surveyed a question regarding the consequences of lie and they found from the first world war to the different cataclysmic events in the world is only happening due to disclosing the truth and conspiracy. As a result, the world is becoming a vulnerable places, where no one belief others: parents not believe their children, peoples don’t believe their representatives, and countries don’t believe their forum or association. These all are prone to the upheaval due to the diversion from telling the truth. As you can see that hiding truth makes the world a vulnerable place by disrupting many association from home to international level, only disclosing truth can hold the word.
In sum, no matter what the other people say regarding the truth telling. Telling truth not only a rewarding from Arab Muhammad but also is the indelible element to protect the world from falling nonreturnable danger. So in speak to tell the truth is the must to hold any relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 354, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practicing telling'.
Suggestion: practicing telling
... would not agree with this. In my view, practicing to tell the truth is the most prerequisite in a...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...g in our society due to the inclination no to tell the truth. For instance, a few ...
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Line 5, column 585, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
...ult, the world is becoming a vulnerable places, where no one belief others: parents no...
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Line 5, column 606, Rule ID: BELIEF_BELIEVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believe' (verb) instead of belief (noun)?
Suggestion: believe
...oming a vulnerable places, where no one belief others: parents not believe their child...
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Line 5, column 921, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun association seems to be countable; consider using: 'many associations'.
Suggestion: many associations
... world a vulnerable place by disrupting many association from home to international level, only ...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...r. So in speak to tell the truth is the must to hold any relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2246.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83010752688 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72952790435 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486021505376 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.90113999 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.952380952 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230125009452 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803447068483 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078840834644 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157861712675 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780422533405 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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