Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Many things and factors are influences people behavior. Some factors are minor, some are majors as well as some are patent others are hard to understand. Such as, attire, speaking style, facial expression are more obvious to locate than the minor facts of honesty, nobility, kindness etc. Clothes is the determiner of the people how to behave and what factors to contribute their behaving style is a matter of debate, some would agree others might have been disagree. In my view, clothes is the major clinical issue to determine people behave is for the following two important reason.
The main reason is that, clothes tells us the people position in the society and as well as their power. In our daily lives, we observe many people, some are politician, lawyer, and military personnel. And we determine them as the first place by seeing their clothes and it reveals a lot about themselves and their kinds of activities. For example, in my first year of university life in Bangladesh our country military chief has been visited in our university campus and we identify him at first place by see his attire and rank. No one need to inform us about anything regarding his familiarity and position. In another incidence, one day we were trek to explore the ancient city of Sonargao in Bangladesh. And we saw there was a red flag to indicate a chief of staff was visiting in this place. So we were unable to explore the place because we had no attire like chief. Only we had a school dress. These attire were not permissible to explore the sensitive place. As you can see that, attire or clothes determine where you are allowed to enter, where you are not, what types of privilege you are going to get and what types you are not to get.
Another reason is that clothes determine or control the person behave and people reaction regarding the person. In our daily lives, we are experiencing a lot of incidence where a person would get some privilege others would have not due to their clothes difference. For instance, in my school days I had read a story regarding Sheikh Sadi. One day the saint was going a program by dressing a plain clothes like a disheveled person. And then the people were inviting him refused to greet him and outcast him like an indigent person. Later that day, he again went to the program by dressing an effulgent clothes. And now people greet and praised him. The same person in the same occasion getting different response from the people who was inviting him. This experience has taught me that, clothes is the determiner and controller how and which response people get from their milieu.
In sum, clothes influences might have been disagreed by the people who says, attire has no influence in people lives. But in reality it has a huge influence in the society not only to identify people power, position but also controlling people behavior. Hence, we should concede attire significant and its influence in our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: disagreed
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'trekked'.
Suggestion: trekked
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean '(clothes)'?
Suggestion: (clothes)
...to the program by dressing an effulgent clothes. And now people greet and praised him. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, regarding, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2444.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74563106796 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45905292263 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456310679612 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.9 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7402760536 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2857142857 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3928571429 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205972374225 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546992588655 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617336818565 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133916609412 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351158694431 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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