Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? ”
Clothes can be categorized by different aspects, including price, color, and model, that each has a significant effect on human behavior. Dresses play an essential role in daily life. In many cases, people can detect a person’s job by looking at one’s clothes. Therefore, many people choose coating style carefully.
For one thing, the style of a person’s dressing affects people’s views, and others' judgments on human life, as a consequence, affect human personality. Clothes have different prices, and the extent of a dress’s value is nearly guessable. So, they display the economic level and social position of a person that, indeed, determine other’s views about that one. If a person dresses luxury, he/she may become popular in society and then behave differently than in the past. For example, imagine a person that everybody loves him/her due to his/her expensive attractive coating, so this person gets a lot of attention that increases one’s self-confidence, which converts this person to a kind and gregarious one. On the other hand, imagine a poor-coating person rejected by most people of society, which increases his/her anger.
Also, different colors of clothes are effective on a human attitude as they have a mental influence on humans. For example, red can make them excited, or a black dress, which some people wear at the funeral, upset them. With these in mind, as I mentioned before, people who wear happy-color clothes behave more gently and tenderly and also are more energetic.
Additionally, the distinction between clothes models and coating techniques leads to various treatments. Wearing suits causes increasing self-confidence, as just people with high positions, like bosses and diplomats, wear them in society.
Consequently, the dressing style has an impressive power that can change human behavior. This power originated from the imaginations that clothes create, show a person’s personality properties in society. Diverse colors and kinds of cloths can convert feelings together. As clothes are so effective, we must be more aware of our coating style.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to coat'.
Suggestion: to coat
... clothes. Therefore, many people choose coating style carefully. For one thing, th...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om the imaginations that clothes create, show a person’s personality properties i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, for example, for one thing, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44072948328 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88994940104 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604863221884 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1792113793 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2105263158 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204681186682 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687325648562 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542930266453 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126408767343 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552722700475 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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