Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I disagree with the statement above. Although I admit that honesty should be one of the most
important consideration in human relationship, sometimes white-lies are necessary not to
damage the relationship.
First, it is not good to tell someone his or her faults or defects directly. By doing so, you might
feel good about telling the truth, but it could hurt the people who will listen. It is natural that
people make mistakes and not everyone is perfect. Despite those shortcomings, we live together
by understanding each other and tolerate those errors as we could be the one who makes the same
mistakes next time. By being pointed out our mistakes or things other people think abominable,
such as the way we look, the clothes we wear, the way we talk and so on, we might hate the
person who criticize us rather than being thankful or correcting those.
Second, it is better not to tell someone serious facts that can possibly discourage him or her. I
speak this from my experience. About one year ago, my nephew got into a terrible car accident
and the doctor said he won’t be able to walk again. We were all shocked and felt desperate.
However, my other nephews decided not to tell the fact to their mother as she could pass off or be
shocked to generate other problems of her own. I felt guilty about not telling the truth to her, who
was relieved and became hopeful by the white-lies that her son would be okay. One year since,
my nephew is getting better and his mother has been a good supporter. If we had told her the
truth, she would have been so desperate that she couldn’t have taken good care of her son and her
own health would have been in danger.
All in all, even though honesty is obviously great virtue, “always telling the truth” is not the key
to maintaining good human relationship. By refraining from telling the truth in certain occasions,
we prevent other people from being hurt by the remarks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82933333333 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63520642244 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541333333333 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0777495755 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.55 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.53405017921 507% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262059420395 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107394665079 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154310946621 0.0737576698707 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816959213251 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201575958464 0.0645574589148 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.