Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Having everything that they need in their normal life is never enough for people. Desiring more luxurious life or even trying to climb to Mars is one of the examples. I do believe that people desire more and more throughout their life. I think this way for three main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, everyone wants to reach fame and rich life but there is not any border to limit it. If you ask people how much money do they wish to have you can get unimaginable amount. People desire money to have easy life or to have fun but when they reach this goal, they always try to make it more and more. For example, one of my coworkers was very poor ten years ago. All he wanted to have a cheapest car and one-bedroom own house that can make his life little bit easy. Seemed like he worked days and nights to realize his minimal life conditions. Some-how he improved his job, got good position in the company and now he has his own company. While our conversation he targeted that although he has more that one hundred stores in the country, he wanted double this number next year. Dreams that he had ten years ago and now can not be compared.
Moreover, not only money and fame are people`s dream nowadays. But no matter what they desire to reach is unlimited. Knowledge is one of them. I myself fifteen years ago, dreamt to earn bachelors degree and no more. I thought if I could to reach this goal, I will be happiest person in the world and will enjoy with this degree until the end of my life. Right after to have my degree I felt a huge emptiness and needed to fill it, so I got my masters degree. Master degree brought more questions that I felt puzzled. Getting PhD in my country gave me a feeling that it is not enough and having a demand to see what scholars do in another country like US, brought me to US. Now, I have no idea where my unpredictable imaginations and dreams will be end.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, no matter what they have, people are never satisfied with. This is because human being is desires more fame, perfect life or more knowledge do not have any borders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45011600928 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30712099013 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522041763341 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.712199764 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.037037037 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.962962963 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18518518519 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370159207299 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108242526408 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150417423771 0.0737576698707 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322102094224 0.150856017488 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.336288986924 0.0645574589148 521% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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