Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize
In this modern era, living in hustle and bustle of sophisticated world have propelled people pondering ways of liberating themselves from burden of live and find the rout of achieving prosperity. The controversial question which has always caused heated debates is whether having the ability to plan and organize is essential for young people or not. In this regard, some people possess conviction that it is dispensable to be capable to plane or organize because there are many other factors which have far-reaching impact. I personally hold an alternative perspective and allege that having plan makes life more convenient. Further discussion can be boiled down to a couple of upcoming reason.
First and foremost, the most momentous key factor to thrive is having concentration on what we are doing. Not only does having plan act as a light to illustrate the upcoming way, but it boost concentration on current tasks. To shed light on this issue take a personal compelling experience; back in university I remember those semester that i had dense schedule. Lots of course, variety of project, and etc. it is axiomatic that the prosperity comes through be fully concentrate on all of them. During doing one of the project I had been distract continually, and I was thinking about other courses and projects. Consequently, I got nervous drastically. Nevertheless, no sooner had I make an organized plan than I did all of them efficiently. As a matter of fact I put all of them in my schedule and I have tried to do them in their determined time. That’s why I accomplished and prospered at the end of the semester.
Another exquisite point which deserves some word here is that in this sophisticated world people bear burden of daily activities. finding job, working a lot to afford life expenses, bringing up children, taking care of them, bringing them to school, continuing their own education, and even social relations with friends and families, all need time. Adjusting time for all of them and allocate energy to them as well as impede getting nervous and anxious is associated with having a proper plan. In contrast, a statistical survey conducted in my country demonstrated that people, who were are not organized and were not able to plan, eternally were nervous and never have they had lucrative and happy life. Had they had an organized schedule, they would have had more meaningful life.
to wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to conclusion that having a lucrative plan is a key factor of reaching prosperity and peaceful ,and also fruit full life. As the Persian proverb says, “there is a time and place for everything." Consequently, it is highly recommended that young people learn to adjust their plan and try to be restricted to the plan, and do each task according to the plan. it is anticipated that these kind of people will prosper more compare with those who are disorganized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, nevertheless, so, well, even so, in contrast, kind of, of course, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2438.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95528455285 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93360496192 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558943089431 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3406951844 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3913043478 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78260869565 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260463314446 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653885054718 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637850393384 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166870472374 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630214542438 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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