You have long been friends with someone. If they do something that you don't like, should you still be friends with him or her?
It goes without saying that human beings have perpetually made a cordial connection with someones throughout their life. It is axiomatic that friends, the genuine one, can be as precious as one's family. The controversial question which has always caused heated debates is whether it is worthwhile to keep long friendships even if they do something that is not according to our desire or not. In this regard, some people possess the conviction that if friends do something as oppose to our willingness, we should terminate our relationship. I, nonetheless, hold an alternative perspective and subscribe to the idea that as long as the task that they do is not offensive or do not irritate me for a long time, we had better keep our long friendship and try to compensate our plausible discord rather than wiping out the root of friendship. Further discussion on this topic can be boiled down to a couple of upcoming reasons below.
The first exquisite reason that we should not end up our friendship is that we have a myriad of memory with each other. If we were friends for a long time, we would definitely, have many things in common. We were sincere and sympathetic with each other, and owing to the length of our friendships, they, plausibly, have been trustworthy enough. Such friends gradually transformed into someone as close, and hearty as our family. Accordingly, we should take into account that as we cannot remove our family members because of their treatments, we also cannot close our eyes in response to what they do just because the tasks that they have done were not according to our desire. Without any doubt, not only continuing friendships would boost our relation, but it would induce cordial and the sense of reliability among us. To shed light on this issue, take a personal experience as a compelling example; my best friend and I have been friends for eventually ten years. During this time, there were many occasions that she did something that I did not like; but because her treatment has never been scornful, I always pardon her. Had not I done that in response to her inappropriate behavior, we would not be as intimate as we are today.
The second momentous reason which bears in mind is that people are different. They have disparate tendencies; they incline to act differently, and briefly owing to their distinctive characteristics and traits, they think differently. As a matter of fact, it seems so optimistic to expect them to treat according to our desire. Moreover, human beings are meaningfully provided that they accept other's differences and try to make consensus rather than expecting them to do exclusively what we like. Consequently, true friendship is the one in which we respect each other's opinions and do not oblige the other one to do in the way of keeping us satisfied without considering their own desire. It is evident that the fewer the expectation arise among friends, the less accentuate the discord, and the stronger their friendship would be.
Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that long friendships certainly has fruitful incomes. We should not abide by our memories, and we ought not to undermine our cordial connection just because they do something in the opposite of our tendency as people have various traits and tend to treat diversely due to their inclination. As the Persian proverb says, " friendship is like a flower, if your friendships have deep root in the soil, do not eradicate it if, occasionally, do not they make the smell you like."
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, briefly, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, while, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 93.0 43.0788530466 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2963.0 1977.66487455 150% => OK
No of words: 601.0 407.700716846 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93011647255 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95129289623 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86510384103 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490848585691 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 906.3 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7082554225 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.458333333 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0416666667 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263862155389 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737392443059 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471109532181 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162237393374 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417465387349 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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