Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ?
Because modern world is very complex, it is essential for young people to have ability to plan and organize.
The society has developed, the population has increased and the world is as advanced as never before. As the world is so complex we have to have certain skills in order to be able to have a normal life. One of these kind of skill is ability to plan and organize, and in my viewpoint, it is essential for youth to have this skill, in order to prevent a lot of problems and to fit in todays marketplace.
To began with, everyday we see people having some problems because they have not planned something or could not organize is as they wanted. Therefore I think that due to having ability to do these kind of thinks will make possible to avoid a lot of problems. For instance by friend was late from the exam and couldn't take it because he did not plan that the bus can move slowly. These made him to wait till the next semester, just because he did not thought about how slow buses are.
To continue with, having ability to organize will make you able to fit into marketplace, in other words this skill is highly recommended when you want to find a job. There are even jobs that are based on these skill. For example my sister is working in an IT company as a project manager, which means she is making plans how the group will work and what they need to do. These kind of jobs are too popular nowadays, and highly paid.
In conclusion, I think that having ability to manage stuff and plan things is very important for young people because it will prevent problems and will give you a wide diversity of jobs. Therefore I recommend anyone to start improving these skill.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e world is as advanced as never before. As the world is so complex we have to hav...
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...dvanced as never before. As the world is so complex we have to have certain skill...
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...o be able to have a normal life. One of these kind of skill is ability to plan and organiz...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...r could not organize is as they wanted. Therefore I think that due to having ability to d...
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... think that due to having ability to do these kind of thinks will make possible to avoid a...
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...ce by friend was late from the exam and couldnt take it because he did not plan that th...
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... next semester, just because he did not thought about how slow buses are. To continue ...
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Suggestion: this skill; these skills
.... There are even jobs that are based on these skill. For example my sister is working in an...
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...ll. For example my sister is working in an IT company as a project manager, which mea...
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...r example my sister is working in an IT company as a project manager, which means she i...
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...oup will work and what they need to do. These kind of jobs are too popular nowadays, and h...
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...ff and plan things is very important for young people because it will prevent pro...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...will give you a wide diversity of jobs. Therefore I recommend anyone to start improving t...
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Message: Did you mean 'this skill' or 'these skills'?
Suggestion: this skill; these skills
...e I recommend anyone to start improving these skill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36860068259 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28101787618 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5823592993 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4615384615 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299517616367 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917023077106 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758894924137 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182729773406 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400995680584 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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