do you agree or disagree with the following statement? because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
That doing our duty well plays a positive role in our life is an undeniable fact. Should we realize the advantages of doing our duty in our life we will ponder over it much more scrupulously. personally, I agree with the statement and this issue recently been the topic of debate among psychologists.
I believe that if I have the variety of duties, I will accomplish few of them well because I can concentrate on few of duty very well, and these are my justification, To begin with, in one of the semesters when I was in university I variety of courses. that semester I could not pass them with a good degree because of it really hard for me to focus on different issues. therefore, I believe that if I have a much different duty, I will do a few of them appropriately. the second reason why I advocate this point of view liaising the fact that we can see whenever our president says that he does different things in our province, we conclude that he will do few of them and most time he does none of them. hence, can be seen that when people busy by different duty maybe do some of their duties. the last but not the least, in our culture there is a proverb " a person can not pick up two watermelons by one hand" according to this proverb doing different thing simultaneously are really hard. not only is hard but also illogical.
Having discussed that issue from that point of view. I would rather look at it from another perspective because a coin has two sides when somebody is busy the do their duties very well and can focus on different things simultaneously but the cunt of them so little that we can ignore them. therefore, I can say that this statement is true in whole.
by taking all above-mentioned argument into concentration, the following conclusion can drown about the issue, underestimating the significance of doing duty very well is not logical. attending to this issue meticulously contributes to making a good situation in our job, and can improve several aspects of our career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, really, second, so, therefore, well, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56906077348 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8359875371 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505524861878 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4473421618 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251107322141 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862694299701 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567535810608 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149749664242 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473921349241 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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