do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? parents are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past.use specific reason and examples to support your ansewr.
That education of children plays an important role in both life and future of the the children is an undeniable fact.Should we realize the signeficance of parents in the education situation of children, we will ponder over the educated children in the past and now much more scrupulusly. the effect that parnents have in education of children have been recently the topic debate among experts.
I believe that nowadays, parennts much more influenced in the education of children than the past. and these are my justification, To begin with, a lot of parents are educated. because the policy of the goverment decided in 20 years ago, we can see that parents have university degree or at least were gradueted from hischool. for example, when I ask my father weather his parents observed in his education my he say that "my parents did not know I went to school or not".However, my parents are going to my school regularly and they are talking with my teachers and they know my situation in the school, therefore parents have observence over the education of children. The second reason Why I advocate this point of vie liaising the fact that parents have a lot of concerns about the future of the children. parents want their children to have wealthy life in the futuer and the know that nowadays, creating a good life because econnemy situation is realy hard. for example, last week my aunts talked each other and topic of them was the education of their children, on the other hand, I never heard my grand father speak about the education of children so I can concud the education of childrent is more important in the present than the past. at least but not the least parents have less kids the the past. i makes parent able to creat better situation for childrien. for instance, once I talked my granfather about my father he said a memorise about my dad then my dad said that this memorise was about my ant. not only did he not remmeber the exactly but also he did not know he had how children. therefore, the number of children makes parents can not involve in the education of their.
Having discussion this point the from tha point of perspective. I would rather look at it from another view as well, we can not see the parent are invoved the education of children as whole because there were few of parents that they tried to observe the education of children. altuough, these parent exiested, the number of them is much more than the past. so we can ignore them.
By taking all above-mentioned argumants into consideration the following conclusion can be drown about the issue. understimating the infuence of parents over the education of children not logical. attending the issue, meticulously, contribute to agreeing witt statment that parents are involved in the education of their children much more than the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, well, at least, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79022403259 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69813699719 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433808553971 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9928281468 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.380952381 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307829899381 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115994817077 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084615065292 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221270963464 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389668432182 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.