do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? parents are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past.use specific reason and examples to support your ansewr.
That education of children plays an important role in both the life and future of the children is an undeniable fact. Should we realize the significance of parents in the education situation of children, we will ponder over the educated children in the past and now much more scrupulously. the effect that parents have on the education of children has been recently the topic debate among experts.
I believe that nowadays, parents much more influenced in the education of children than in the past. and these are my justification, To begin with, a lot of parents are educated. because the policy of the government decided 20 years ago, we can see that parents have a university degree or at least were graduated from high school. for example, when I ask my father whether his parents observed in his education my he says that "my parents did not know I went to school or not".However, my parents are going to my school regularly and they are talking with my teachers and they know my situation in school, therefore parents have observance over the education of children. The second reason why I advocate this point of view liaising the fact that parents have a lot of concerns about the future of the children. parents want their children to have a wealthy life in the future and they know that nowadays, creating a good life because of the economic situation is hard. for example, last week my aunts talked to each other and topic of them was the education of their children, on the other hand, I never heard my grandfather speak about the education of children so I can conclude the education of children is more important in the present than the past. at least but not the least parents have fewer kids in the past. I make parents able to create a better situation for children. for instance, once I talked to my grandfather about my father he said a memorize my dad, then my dad said that this memorize was about my ant. not only did he not remember them exactly but also he did not know he had how children. therefore, the number of children makes parents can not involve in the education of theirs.
Having discussion this point from that point of perspective. I would rather look at it from another view as well, we can not see the parent are involved the education of children as a whole because there were few parents that they tried to observe the education of children. although these parents existed, the number of them is much more than in the past. so we can ignore them.
By taking all the above-mentioned arguments into consideration the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. underestimating the influence of parents over the education of children not logical. attending the issue, meticulously, contribute to agreeing with the statement that parents are involved in the education of their children much more than the past.
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... the education of children not logical. attending the issue, meticulously, contribute to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, well, at least, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2371.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75150300601 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72064441198 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.414829659319 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3385849113 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.772727273 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6818181818 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329727817913 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128081371903 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974884740244 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248485907646 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484328085351 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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