Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because people are busy doing many different things, they do very few things well.
In today's progressive and competitive world we live, no one can turn a blind eye on the significance of the quality of the works that done by people and employees. When it comes that whether being busy decrease the quality of affairs or not there are different ideas. Some people believes that being multi-task has it's tall on concentration, but others hold the opinion that it is more advantages to do several tasks in the same time. From my vantage point, the last group carries more weight, and these are my justifications.
To begin with, people who have several tasks to do are more inclined to be schedule, set goals and priorities to their duties, which result in doing the duties in the best way. They make good use of their time and energy, and form a lifestyle that is compatible to do many tasks is the same time. To illustrate, imagine someone who merely have something to do, so they doesn't need to set some goals for how to use they time. They think they always have time, and wait for last minutes to feel the limitation of time. I know many people who just have to study and after that they really nothing to do, but for this single track they absolutely hesitate until it become late, and studying in a hurry, they hardly pass their final exams. On the other hand, someone who has a part-expart-exams besides his university tasks have learned to manage they time. As a result they accomplish the both areas, even better than the first group.
Moreover, busy people are occupy by their works, which prevent them dwelling on negative emotions. To shed light on, usually people who have more free time, and didn't a useful thing become bored and depressed, but being busy give person a feel of self-satisfaction. Busy people have no time to become boring or feel inefficient. Morever, thanks to being active they recieve a lot of feedback from their invironment, and this make them happy and energetic. Therefore, having several tasks to do lesson negative emotions, and provide required energy to do affairs as well as it is possible.
Last but not least, activity could boost the brain health. To clarify, the brain needs activity to maintain its healthiness. So many research reveals that dopamine, a hormones release when person involve himself with an action, plays a pivotal role in preventing cognitive diseases like alzhimer. By this explanations, It becomes clear that being occupied with several task is nesseary for maintain the healthiness of brain, which will end up being productive in the long-term.
CConsequently, by considering the reasons I proposed earlier, I personally believe that being busy help people to manage their time, prevent negative emotions, and keep brain healthy, which all lead in works done in the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2294.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84989429175 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63992581018 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524312896406 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4865271045 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.238095238 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5238095238 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225872145158 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671247756007 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574280857594 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109495798886 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699447427942 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.