It is undeniable that people are bored and do not gratify with their lives. Personally, I probably agree with this recognition. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the people are too busy to relax and gather with their family because every family member have their own duty. Rather than spending time for family, the people take a lot of time at their office to work or finish deadline, which is so bored so that they easily feel unhappy about their lives. My brother experience is a compelling example of this, after graduating from university, he started working for a big company. Sometimes he stays at company until midnight to finish his work. As a result, he does not have time for his family to refresh his emotion after working under a lot of pressure for a long day. Too busy is the first feature that make people feel bored about their lives.
Furthermore, life always exists contention between people and people by many aspects such as social status, salary or even score in class. People will never satisfy with their lives, they claim too many things while they do not make any innovation of themselve. For instance, when you just spend five hours at work, yet you want to get the same salary with the person who works nine hours a day, which is extremely unreasonable.
In conclusion, I probably agree that people are become bored and unsatisfied with their lives. This is because they are too busy for dailylife and this is because of the contention between people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69003690037 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36058556522 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549815498155 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.05484077 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7857142857 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221881525722 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907486549246 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684323844858 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15603423876 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163825533318 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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