Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to learn about life is by listening to the advice of others. Give specific examples to support your opinion.
There is no doubt that people advise plays an important role in out lives. People can avoid risky situations by following certain advices. Although some people, if asked, they would say that they do not like to follow anyone advice as it might impractical or unrealistic, People should always follow others advices especially if those who are giving the advices is their parents or elderly people. The basis for my views are as the following.
Parents are the ones who lives with us, take care of their children and they are the only one know the best for their children. Given that they seeking to see their children successful, they devote all the experience they gain in their lives to support their children. For instance, Because my parents know that Stanford University in the United States Of America ranking as one of the best in North america., My parents advised me to complete my study there. Not only that, but also they knew that studing in U.S.A will expose me to different culture, language and different live style. Because I listen to my parent's advice, I had the chance to speake English, make new friends and explore different culture and life style. If I didn't follow my parent's advice, my experience would stay local.
In addition to the previous point, listening to advises significantly make a differents. Certain situation consider normal in one country, could consider inappropriate behaviour in another country. Therefore, people seek the new country advise before they move there. For instance,while late night party and loud music consider normal in Egypte, It considered unacceptable behavior in U.S.A. Therefore, when I moved to U.S.A. for the first time I have been in a very embarrassing situation. People started to complain because I had the music on late at night. If I followed someone advice before I move to U.S.A I could avoid such an accord situation.
As a conclusion, There is a saying says that " listening to people advice won't hurt". It true that people should thinks about others advises if they are familiar with the situation or have a previous experience. However, when it comes to a new experience, people have to follow their parents and elderly advises before they reevaluate it.
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Essay evaluation report
people advise plays an important role
people's advise plays an important role
as it might impractical or unrealistic
as it might be impractical or unrealistic
Sentence: People should always follow others advices especially if those who are giving the advices is their parents or elderly people.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and advices
ones who lives with us
ones who live with us
they are the only one know the best
they are the only ones who know the best
they seeking to see their children successful,
they are seeking to see their children successful,
listening to advises significantly make a differents
listening to advises significantly makes a difference
Certain situation consider normal in one country, could consider inappropriate behaviour in another country
Certain situations considering normal in one country could consider an inappropriate behaviour in another country
Sentence: If I followed someone advice before I move to U.S.A I could avoid such an accord situation.
Description: A pronoun, nominal is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to someone and advice
Sentence: As a conclusion, There is a saying says that ' listening to people advice won't hurt'.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and advice
Sentence: It true that people should thinks about others advises if they are familiar with the situation or have a previous experience.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to It and true
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to should and thinks
Description: The fragment others advises if is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace advises with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: Not only that, but also they knew that studing in U.S.A will expose me to different culture, language and different live style.
Error: studing Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Because I listen to my parent's advice, I had the chance to speake English, make new friends and explore different culture and life style.
Error: speake Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In addition to the previous point, listening to advises significantly make a differents.
Error: differents Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 13 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 13 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 384 350
No. of Characters: 1809 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.427 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.711 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.519 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.211 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.418 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
... that they do not like to follow anyone advice as it might impractical or unrealistic,...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... but also they knew that studing in U.S.A will expose me to different culture, la...
^
Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifferent culture, language and different live style. Because I listen to my paren...
^^
Line 3, column 733, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... different culture and life style. If I didnt follow my parents advice, my experience...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'advise'.
Suggestion: advise
...ion to the previous point, listening to advises significantly make a differents. Certai...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...ise before they move there. For instance,while late night party and loud music conside...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cause I had the music on late at night. If I followed someone advice before I move...
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Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...wed someone advice before I move to U.S.A I could avoid such an accord situation....
^
Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'A' or 'I'?
Suggestion: A; I
...wed someone advice before I move to U.S.A I could avoid such an accord situation. ...
^^^
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... conclusion, There is a saying says that listening to people advice wont hurt. It...
^^
Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trues'?
Suggestion: trues
...istening to people advice wont hurt. It true that people should thinks about others ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...e wont hurt. It true that people should thinks about others advises if they are famili...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239808153477 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.158273381295 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.083932853717 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0287769784173 0.046263068375 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0959232613909 0.0685040099705 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.122302158273 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0263788968825 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61710476163 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0359712230216 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.00239808153477 0.00188951952338 127% => OK
Determiners: 0.0647482014388 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0215827338129 0.0209618222197 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00959232613909 0.0139019557991 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2238.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 375.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.968 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.392 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258666666667 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101333333333 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61710476163 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 56.6310499406 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.75 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9503910307 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.6166666667 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.37288135593 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315694917784 0.300154397459 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12165457407 0.103427244359 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.104748691039 0.0752933317313 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461358881837 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123291601793 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115333865275 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716630520565 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.256223241927 0.336927656856 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00482463031383 0.067059652881 7% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207844666849 0.210909579961 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212011220811 0.0618886996521 34% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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