Some people think that a group tour is not the best way to travel because they value an individual’s choices while traveling. However, in my opinion, the best way of enjoying travel is a group tour with a guide since it gives you chances to meet different people and its convenience.
To begin with, touring in a group is a great way to meet and interact with new people. There are getting fewer and fewer opportunities to hang out with unfamiliar people as people get older. When they were children, people could build relationships with their schoolmates or neighbors. However, since society becomes individualistic and people have a lack of chance to start new relationships, it is truly hard for people to make new friends. Therefore, the group tour with a bunch of people enables to open up conversations with a topic of their travel, and they share ideas and thought which allows them to be friends. Considering the fact that they chose the same place to travel, the members of the tour may have similar interests and preferences. These affinities are surely helpful to socialize with one another.
On top of that, traveling in a group following a tour guide is more convenient and easier for those who live harsh society like today. Most people these days get stressed out a lot because of the matter of works, finances, and competitions. They often make a journey to relieve stress. By taking a schedule up to a tour guide, people can escape with stress from planning a tour which is a tedious process to organize. Think about the opposite situation. If you decided to travel alone, you have to take care of all your plans and make schedules concurrently set up an important project at your work. This is a quite stressful situation you may encounter when you made a decision for a self-tour. However, the tour guide already knew a variety of places to eat and accommodate. Moreover, he or she has a wide range of information about beautiful and memorable visiting places in a certain region. You will be filled with a sense of satisfaction and pleasure without the risk of getting lost or selecting a poor hotel.
To sum up, I acknowledge that some people prefer to travel alone and consider it as the best way to travel. However, I strongly believe that the benefits of traveling on a group with a tour guide outweigh the benefits of traveling alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'chance'
Suggestion: chance
...up tour with a guide since it gives you chances to meet different people and its conven...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75060532688 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78137101396 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530266343826 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3817534999 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320746894135 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972323286249 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824547554689 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231966882733 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512311708775 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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